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  Posted on August 19, 2014 20:24
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~ Sorry for grammatical errors, I used the google translator :/
~ Rate and cnc, and explain what you did not like the char so I can improve it !
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  Posted on August 19, 2014 22:26
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Work on your grammar

8/10
  Posted on August 20, 2014 03:13
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Really like this character. I was pondering to myself if I think his 1st skill would be better without a CD or not since the damage is so low but because of the second effect it looks balanced. The wording on Kamui is very confusing. Does it reduce the attack damage on Obito or the enemy attacking? How can someone attack someone who's invul? And does does Katon FB destroy all DD then deal the damage like Oro? The wording's really throwing me off.

  Posted on August 20, 2014 09:26
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grammar is pretty bad
Full Blast should cost 1 more random chakra
remove damage reduction effect from 2nd skill, its way too OP
like kakashi said I dont understand who will deal less damage after Kamui is used...
7/10
  Posted on August 20, 2014 16:30
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bad grammar, op
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  Posted on August 21, 2014 00:26
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UpsetBastard wrote:
Work on your grammar

8/10

Yeah, I know haha. THX

kakashi-sama101 wrote:
Really like this character. I was pondering to myself if I think his 1st skill would be better without a CD or not since the damage is so low but because of the second effect it looks balanced. The wording on Kamui is very confusing. Does it reduce the attack damage on Obito or the enemy attacking? How can someone attack someone who's invul? And does does Katon FB destroy all DD then deal the damage like Oro? The wording's really throwing me off.


First, thanks for the critique.
Well here we go (ignore the grammatical errors, I'm brazilian and use the damn translator) ..
About "Piercing Shuriken" has one CD, because it leaves the enemy permanently marked each time it is used, and still improve with additional 5 cumulative damage.
About Kamui, I made it clear (I think haha) that in "THE ENEMIES que attack will take 5 affliction damage for 2 turns and have reduce the damage of your attacks 25% ...." "THE ENEMIES" understand? .
And he leaves the enemy allies invul skills, ie that help in your own team.
And I chose to destroy the entire defense of one enemy, because I do not remember a character that already do this, and have always wanted someone on my team who could do this to help in battle, as well as on Soul-Arena.
Well, I guess that could explain (if the google translator not troll me haha: D).
Thanks again, if you have not understood anything else, just tell me. And ah, I'll leave here in Portuguese if you have not understood by grammatical errors.>> " Primeiramente, obrigado pela crítica.
Bom vamos lá ( ignore os erros gramaticais, sou brasileiro e uso a droga do tradutor )..
Sobre o " Piercing Shuriken" tem 1 CD, pois ele deixa o inimigo marcado permanentemente toda vez que for usado, e ainda melhorará com 5 danos adicionais cumulativos.
Sobre o Kamui, eu deixei claro (acho haha ) que em " THE ENEMIES that attack will take 5 affliction damage por 2 turns and have reduce the damage of your attacks 25%...." " THE ENEMIES" entendeu ? .
E ele deixa o inimigo invul à skills aliados, ou seja que o ajudem em seu próprio time.
E preferi que destrua toda a defesa de 1 inimigo, pois não me recordo de um personagem que já faça isso, e sempre quis alguém em meu time que pudesse fazer isso para ajudar nas batalhas, assim como no Soul-Arena.
Bom, acho que consegui explicar ( se o google tradutor não me trollar haha :D ).
Obrigado mais uma vez, caso não tenha entendido mais alguma coisa, só me dizer. E ah, deixarei aqui em português caso você não tenha entendido pelos erros gramaticais. " <<


wernad3 wrote:
grammar is pretty bad
Full Blast should cost 1 more random chakra
remove damage reduction effect from 2nd skill, its way too OP
like kakashi said I dont understand who will deal less damage after Kamui is used...
7/10


I think if you read the text left to Kakashi, understand bro.
On the amount of chakra, I think this way is good, because Katon already uses a random, and Kamui too, then he would be very cliched as most of the characters who consume more chakra what foods haha. THX
The grammar is something difficult to solve, but would appreciate if someone help me, just have patience.


saske1112 wrote:
bad grammar, op
7


I know :/