Edo Tensei Uchiha Itachi (S) - char. and mission


 Topic: Edo Tensei Uchiha Itachi (S) - char. and mission
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Poll: Would you use it?
11 vote(s) since June 1, 2014 10:03
Yes. (4) (36%)
No. (2) (18%)
No (but i'll explain in the comments why not) (0) (0%)
I didn't even read it. (5) (45%)
  Posted on June 1, 2014 10:03
nunopnr
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#1
Hey there.

Please rate my character and its mission, and explain if you rate under 8/10.
Oh, one more thing! Please don't rip or spam.
Thanks!

ATTENTION: I know this character is complex and probably too big, but hey, it's Itachi, everything about him is complex

DON'T FORGET TO CLICK IN MY SIG TO SEE MY CHARACTER SHOWCASE






HERE ARE MY OTHER CHARACTERS:

  Posted on June 1, 2014 10:07
Suigetsuuu!
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#2
No one's gonna read this.
  Posted on June 1, 2014 10:23
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#3
4/10 wayyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy to many skills + More to read than my english exam
seems op
Ingame acc
  Posted on June 1, 2014 10:30
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#4
Pheonix should cost 1 nin instead of tai
2nd skill should not be ranged and cost just 1 blood
Crow Gentjutsu is not Ranged too
Amaterasu should make only its main target to be defenseless
Izanami is pretty OP but original
Yasaka Magatama should stun more classes than just Mental if its not successful...
Totsuka should cost blood+gen

its really original char i like him
i like you balanced him well even with that number of alt. skills
8/10 (i would use him)

EDIT @Marceline: Originality isn't something what no one else have seen before, originality can be different way of using something you see everyday
  Posted on June 1, 2014 10:30
Marceline
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#5
Usually, I like to give a thought out cnc to help makers improve. Seriously, 11 skills? 1 of 2 things is gonna happen. People will either rate 8/10 + just to post hunt or they will tell you its too long.


It's too long. I'm not gonna try to help you, because you already know what's wrong with it.
wernad3 wrote:
Pheonix should cost 1 nin instead of tai
2nd skill should not be ranged and cost just 1 blood
Crow Gentjutsu is not Ranged too
Amaterasu should make only its main target to be defenseless
Izanami is pretty OP but original
Yasaka Magatama should stun more classes than just Mental if its not successful...
Totsuka should cost blood+gen

its really original char i like him
i like you balanced him well even with that number of alt. skills
8/10 (i would use him)

Its not original, its just a bunch of BS thrown together. Well I guess you could call that original.
  Posted on June 1, 2014 10:32
pawelgs1
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#6
Too many skills, lol. You should split it into 4 or more characters, or just choose 4-5/6 best skills for him, but not 11. It's probably even more than Inner Ichigo from Soul-Arena has. And why hs he 2 invul skill, that just change the name and picture?
  Posted on June 1, 2014 10:39
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#7
except there is 11 skill u hate the cooldown ?! xD most of the skill have not cooldown bro
  Posted on June 1, 2014 12:06
w1NNNd
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#8
7/10
  Posted on June 1, 2014 12:36
DanyMac2011
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#9
Way too many skills in just 1 character.
Facepic by: IZUNAAA
  Posted on June 1, 2014 19:18
Tygutei
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#10
Way too many skills in too much detail. It's impossible to know if this is a stun/AOE affliction/counter/spike/support character


Custom made characters:

Young Gaara---Fuujin and Raijin---Pyrotechnic---Morino Ibiki (S)
  Posted on January 14, 2017 03:23
HidanYuga
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#11
nunopnr wrote:
ATTENTION: I know this character is complex and probably too big, but hey, it's Itachi, everything about him is complex

Hahahaha, the best one! xD 11/10

  Posted on January 14, 2017 03:24
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  Posted on January 17, 2017 16:16
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#13
way to much you shold simple it
Tragicksz.
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