Utada Kishimi

Sakine Rank: member Forum Rank: Academy Student Posts: 12 Joined on: June 4, 2007

#1 this is my secons character Kishimi Utada (my first was Sakine) i only need to make Haruka and Torami sensei. i will make the last attack darker over the weekend, so besides that, i would like your thoughts (and please let me know if somethingn is wrong) This is a Naruto team i created. the one on the left is Kishimi (beautiful crest) the one in the center is Sakine, the one on the right is Haruka (tranquil), the sensei in the middle is Torami Sensei (beautiful tiger), and their team fox, Sashin (i know his head is a bit big too). Background- They come from a smaller country below the leaf village, the Herb Country, where they live in Hitou, or the village hidden in the Hot Springs. Their village is famous for their remedies and healing springs. since the population has more girls, the squads normally have two females and one male. They also possess the most medical ninja, and have foxes which they experimented on long ago to have certain qualities others do not, specialized for missions. their team was assigned a fox named Sashin but ever since their former teamate (and sakine's bestfriend) died by the Akatsuki, they decided they take off to Konoha and go back and forth between villages when needed. they went to Konoha inorder to live without worry of the clans return, and work alongside with their allies. they are assigned to report with Gai's squad as their hosts for Konoha. but Sakine and her team want revenge, and are determined to kill the clan when they meet again. KISHIMI- age: 16 gender: female rank: chuunin specialty: water manipulation, healing weapon(s): standard ninja tools interesting facts: she was originally in a special medical ninja training group, but got transfered into her present squad because she needed to fill in for their former teamate who died by the Akatsuki clan. she also has a crush on Haruka SAKINE- age: 16 gender: female rank: chuunin specialty: ninjutsu, healing weapon(s): whip of chakra, standard ninja tools interesting facts: she comes from a clan that is dying out, and possess the blood line trait to conjure up a mass amount of chakra in the form of a whip, and are able to use it as a weapon. after awhile in konoha with Gai's group, she and tenten become friends, and she developes feelings for Neji (dont say anything about this, its my story). HARUKA- age: 16 gender: male rank: chuunin specialty: swordsman, medicine maker weapon(s): sword, standard ninja tools interesting facts: when it comes to healing, he mostly gathers herbs and grinds them into medicine, unlike the other two who use Tsunade's style of healing. he is a master with his sword, and has feelings for Sakine. TORAMI SENSEI- age: unknown gender: female rank: jounin specialty: water manipulation weapon(s): standard ninja tools interesting facts: she taught Kishimi how to manipulate water by using chakra to fuse it within its particles.

ChrisNemo Rank: member Forum Rank: Kage Posts: 3607 Joined on: August 19, 2006

#2 She's too weak... Advice of the Week: Natural talent beats hard work every time. Nemo wants YOU to help him in his quest. Talking in 3rd person ftw. Witty line here.

Rouge-Ninja Rank: member Forum Rank: Chuunin Posts: 485 Joined on: June 2, 2007

#3 Good job! I havent seen any other ideas yet for manipulating objects. I liked it alot. Good sotry to.

Sakine Rank: member Forum Rank: Academy Student Posts: 12 Joined on: June 4, 2007

#4 Quote by ChrisNemo She's too weak... how?

Sakine Rank: member Forum Rank: Academy Student Posts: 12 Joined on: June 4, 2007

#5 Quote by Rouge-Ninja Good job! I havent seen any other ideas yet for manipulating objects. I liked it alot. Good sotry to. thank you

Rouge-Ninja Rank: member Forum Rank: Chuunin Posts: 485 Joined on: June 2, 2007

#6 The only thing that needs work, is more descriptive with her moves, and make the 20 damage like 35 damage and make it cos 2 chakra

Sakine Rank: member Forum Rank: Academy Student Posts: 12 Joined on: June 4, 2007

#7 Quote by Rouge-Ninja The only thing that needs work, is more descriptive with her moves, and make the 20 damage like 35 damage and make it cos 2 chakra it does cost 2 chakra, and i made it 20 so that the other one would cost 35. i thought it was pretty evened out

stunzu2 Rank: member Forum Rank: Academy Student Posts: 10 Joined on: June 2, 2007

#8 cool i like the story too

ChrisNemo Rank: member Forum Rank: Kage Posts: 3607 Joined on: August 19, 2006

#9 Well, what's the cooldown on Chakra Manipulation? Advice of the Week: Natural talent beats hard work every time. Nemo wants YOU to help him in his quest. Talking in 3rd person ftw. Witty line here.

thetrue4thhokage Rank: member Forum Rank: Missing-Nin Posts: 1917 Joined on: June 11, 2007

#10 omg the pics omg they bur theys burns...........................they suck big time

NarutoKing007 Rank: member Forum Rank: Kage Posts: 3743 Joined on: June 3, 2007

#11 pretty good Shadow Avengers Elite

Ruduen Rank: member Forum Rank: Genin Posts: 169 Joined on: September 22, 2006

#12 Water Manipulation... I'd at least increase the damage to 30. Well, that's all that I've really got to say at the moment. Here's my character. Drop a line if you have the time. Abatsu Sekisui And, here's my Character-In-Progress. Usuto Karori And my Using Team 7 Guide. Let me know what you think.

Sakine Rank: member Forum Rank: Academy Student Posts: 12 Joined on: June 4, 2007

#13 Quote by thetrue4thhokage omg the pics omg they bur theys burns...........................they suck big time i said i would fix them up at my dads house in the future, since i couldnt do it this week i'll have to do it next week

Sakine Rank: member Forum Rank: Academy Student Posts: 12 Joined on: June 4, 2007

#14 Quote by ChrisNemo Well, what's the cooldown on Chakra Manipulation? ooh, thanks for pointing that out

Fire_Fairy1994 Rank: member Forum Rank: Academy Student Posts: 2 Joined on: June 27, 2007

#15 Good Job I like it alot!

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