Utada Kishimi


 Topic: Utada Kishimi
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74 vote(s) since June 20, 2007 03:45
should be in the game (5/5) (11) (15%)
pretty good (4/5) (12) (16%)
okay (3/5) (17) (23%)
needs work (2/5) (10) (14%)
nah (1/5 T_T) (11) (15%)
i like the story ^^ (5) (7%)
make the others playable too (5) (7%)
other (please comment why) (3) (4%)
  Posted on June 20, 2007 03:45
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this is my secons character Kishimi Utada (my first was Sakine) i only need to make Haruka and Torami sensei. i will make the last attack darker over the weekend, so besides that, i would like your thoughts (and please let me know if somethingn is wrong)





This is a Naruto team i created. the one on the left is Kishimi (beautiful crest) the one in the center is Sakine, the one on the right is Haruka (tranquil), the sensei in the middle is Torami Sensei (beautiful tiger), and their team fox, Sashin (i know his head is a bit big too).

Background-
They come from a smaller country below the leaf village, the Herb Country, where they live in Hitou, or the village hidden in the Hot Springs. Their village is famous for their remedies and healing springs. since the population has more girls, the squads normally have two females and one male.

They also possess the most medical ninja, and have foxes which they experimented on long ago to have certain qualities others do not, specialized for missions.
their team was assigned a fox named Sashin

but ever since their former teamate (and sakine's bestfriend) died by the Akatsuki, they decided they take off to Konoha and go back and forth between villages when needed. they went to Konoha inorder to live without worry of the clans return, and work alongside with their allies. they are assigned to report with Gai's squad as their hosts for Konoha. but Sakine and her team want revenge, and are determined to kill the clan when they meet again.


KISHIMI-
age: 16
gender: female
rank: chuunin
specialty: water manipulation, healing
weapon(s): standard ninja tools
interesting facts: she was originally in a special medical ninja training group, but got transfered into her present squad because she needed to fill in for their former teamate who died by the Akatsuki clan. she also has a crush on Haruka

SAKINE-
age: 16
gender: female
rank: chuunin
specialty: ninjutsu, healing
weapon(s): whip of chakra, standard ninja tools
interesting facts: she comes from a clan that is dying out, and possess the blood line trait to conjure up a mass amount of chakra in the form of a whip, and are able to use it as a weapon. after awhile in konoha with Gai's group, she and tenten become friends, and she developes feelings for Neji (dont say anything about this, its my story).

HARUKA-
age: 16
gender: male
rank: chuunin
specialty: swordsman, medicine maker
weapon(s): sword, standard ninja tools
interesting facts: when it comes to healing, he mostly gathers herbs and grinds them into medicine, unlike the other two who use Tsunade's style of healing. he is a master with his sword, and has feelings for Sakine.

TORAMI SENSEI-
age: unknown
gender: female
rank: jounin
specialty: water manipulation
weapon(s): standard ninja tools
interesting facts: she taught Kishimi how to manipulate water by using chakra to fuse it within its particles.
  Posted on June 20, 2007 03:50
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She's too weak...
Advice of the Week: Natural talent beats hard work every time.


Nemo wants YOU to help him in his quest. Talking in 3rd person ftw.

Witty line here.
  Posted on June 20, 2007 03:50
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Good job! I havent seen any other ideas yet for manipulating objects. I liked it alot. Good sotry to.
  Posted on June 20, 2007 03:51
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Quote by ChrisNemo
She's too weak...

how?
  Posted on June 20, 2007 03:51
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Quote by Rouge-Ninja
Good job! I havent seen any other ideas yet for manipulating objects. I liked it alot. Good sotry to.

thank you
  Posted on June 20, 2007 03:52
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The only thing that needs work, is more descriptive with her moves, and make the 20 damage like 35 damage and make it cos 2 chakra
  Posted on June 20, 2007 03:54
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Quote by Rouge-Ninja
The only thing that needs work, is more descriptive with her moves, and make the 20 damage like 35 damage and make it cos 2 chakra


it does cost 2 chakra, and i made it 20 so that the other one would cost 35. i thought it was pretty evened out
  Posted on June 20, 2007 03:56
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cool i like the story too







  Posted on June 20, 2007 04:01
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Well, what's the cooldown on Chakra Manipulation?
Advice of the Week: Natural talent beats hard work every time.


Nemo wants YOU to help him in his quest. Talking in 3rd person ftw.

Witty line here.
  Posted on June 20, 2007 04:11
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omg the pics omg they bur theys burns...........................they suck big time
  Posted on June 20, 2007 04:13
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pretty good
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  Posted on June 20, 2007 13:28
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Water Manipulation... I'd at least increase the damage to 30.

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  Posted on June 24, 2007 22:16
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Quote by thetrue4thhokage
omg the pics omg they bur theys burns...........................they suck big time

i said i would fix them up at my dads house in the future, since i couldnt do it this week i'll have to do it next week
  Posted on June 24, 2007 22:17
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Quote by ChrisNemo
Well, what's the cooldown on Chakra Manipulation?

ooh, thanks for pointing that out
  Posted on June 27, 2007 17:37
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Good Job I like it alot!
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