Gaara (pre shippuden)


 Topic: Gaara (pre shippuden)
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  Posted on April 15, 2014 16:29
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  Posted on April 15, 2014 16:31
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Dont u think sand sheild is oOP with 0 cooldown and one random??

Anyhow it is good...

8/10

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  Posted on April 15, 2014 16:33
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2/10.
  Posted on April 15, 2014 16:38
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DarrickChan6580 wrote:
Dont u think sand sheild is oOP with 0 cooldown and one random??

Anyhow it is good...

8/10

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  Posted on April 15, 2014 16:42
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l-o-w wrote:
DarrickChan6580 wrote:
Dont u think sand sheild is oOP with 0 cooldown and one random??

Anyhow it is good...

8/10

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  Posted on April 15, 2014 16:49
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A tad bit too OP with the sand shield. Otherwise pretty much just a copy of the original, with worse grammar.
4/10

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  Posted on April 15, 2014 16:51
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It's a little overpowered it looks like the in-game one. It's ok that the third skill gives him 100 DD for 1 turn but it needs a cooldown of 2 if so. The first and the second skills are similar to the in-game ones. I suggest you to change that pics and also change that skills to something more original :3
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  Posted on April 15, 2014 17:22
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its like Gaara we already have, just Sand Shield gives pretty OP amount of DD...
3/10
  Posted on April 15, 2014 17:32
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Copy of original,3rd skill op
2/10 just for your effort otherwise this is trash
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  Posted on April 15, 2014 17:39
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2/10, 0 CD with 100 DD? thats OP, its really similar to the current Gaara we have now, pics need more saturation and the FP could be better

Tip: make sure the bottom of the chin is visible in the FP next time
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  Posted on April 15, 2014 17:40
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Thanks you all for the feedback. I appreciate it!
  Posted on April 15, 2014 18:59
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Copy of original,3rd skill op
2/10 just for your effort otherwise this is trash
Really? You don't need to call it a trash. I'm teaching him, and he's still learning. Encourage him and point his mistakes out instead of saying it's a "trash". A little bit of respect is always welcome.

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Low, I can see your pictures improved since our last tutorial. But, again, don't crop his chin off. The stock is fine, but there are better facepic stocks for Gaara. Just like some other people above me said, he's pretty much alike to the Gaara we already have in-game. 3rd skill is OP. 100 DD, for 1 random and no CD? It's really OP. Work on balance and, especially, flow. The flow happens when skills work together, and each skill interferes in other. Overall, more creativity.

Pics: 7.5/10
Balance: 6/10
Originality: -
Flow: -
Concept: -
Classes: 6.5/10
Grammar: 8/10
Overall: 4/10

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