Revived Madara (S) || By Rasengan_89


 Topic: Revived Madara (S) || By Rasengan_89
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  Posted on March 9, 2014 18:52
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Hello there.
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RATE AND COMMENT PLEASE, EXPLAIN RATE UNDER 8.5

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T-BoyXkid wrote:
Name: Revived Madara
Arc: Don't know the arc name but the latesg one in the manga.
Anime or Manga?: Manga
Limitations: 3 no cost skills and 1 skill which costs all kinds of chakra. Their costs cannot be altered. He takes recoil effects or damage whenever he uses his skills. Also, try to make himself strong even though he seems he will suck.

Chakra Usage: 1 0MsWJ.png - 1 dTyPy.png - 1 hy5mN.png - 1 URWAu.png - 1 VgHxG.png

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Here you are some notes before you comment:
- About the skills
Just define OP and UP and how should I change it.
- About the grammar
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- About the CnC
I want to read them. Without them I cant improve the character and myself

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- Rasengan_89 (me) for editing the pictures and making the characters.

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  Posted on March 9, 2014 18:59
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Hes op rasen 6,5/10
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  Posted on March 9, 2014 19:00
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Mugi-Kun wrote:
Hes op rasen 6,5/10

Explain why ?
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  Posted on March 9, 2014 19:07
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He is OP, bro....
I would rate him 7/10.

The problem I find is about his chakra costs. Even though he takes damage,his skills are quite powerful. He could easily kill his opponents if there is a good healer in his team.

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  Posted on March 9, 2014 19:08
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he takes affliction damage or normal from his skills ? i think he is really original but really OP... if you got healer in team he can do much damage to opponents team and stay alive.. 3rd skills should heal only 10HP per chakra. And he removes 3 chakra from then instantly or 1 chakra every turn ? 7/10 i will change rate after better explaination...
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  Posted on March 9, 2014 19:19
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It's a bit OP for me. Honestly I thought a character like this would be weak.
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It's like his skills are matched their recoil however BE makes the skills seem like their recoils weren't worth it. Maybe the recoil he takes could be permenately sealed off.
  Posted on March 9, 2014 19:27
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he looks so nice, but BE really makes him OP; 9/10 :amused
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  Posted on March 9, 2014 19:29
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10/10 of course he is op he is Rikudo madara after all.

Oh please make a 8 gates Gai when it comes out.
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  Posted on March 9, 2014 20:30
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Hmm.
Guys, the last skill doesnt deal damage unless the targets of that skill are affected by the second skill. And Madara heals only if the first skill affects the enemy.
It costs 4 specific and also, if none of those are active, Madara takes 5 affliction damage (recoil damage works like affliction damage) per EACH chakra removed.
If he removes 6 chakra, he loses 30 health.

Also, all his skills can be interrupted, countered, Reflected.
Thanks for the feedback though, I might just increase the recoil of the second skill.
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  Posted on March 11, 2014 07:35
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Bumping this epicness up
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  Posted on March 16, 2014 08:18
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Bump :v
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  Posted on March 16, 2014 11:49
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You bumped twice, of course you want a reply :D

Hmm, 8/10. Madara would have taken 30 affliction damage, if he used his first skill on the first turn and 2nd skill on the 2nd turn right? This is all balanced, even if it costs nothing to stun an enemy (I don't thank you want to have this dude in a 1on1).

His 3rd skill totally makes him OP, but I see Madara dead b4 he can even use it. I'm gonna say that skill is a bit unbalanced. He might never get to use it, but it's always possible, and it's HELLA OP WHEN POSSIBLE.

Maybe somewhere you can mention if he uses BE or, maybe Limbo he can't be healed during the time? I don't know what else to say...
  Posted on March 19, 2014 07:24
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Beast Extraction is the problem. As soon as that is pulled off, the opponent will not be able to attack for 3 turns… the skills itself are unique and quite interesting. giving the a chakra cost would balance it out too.

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  Posted on March 20, 2014 09:08
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Considered that it doesn't deal damage but only removes chairs for a very high cost I believe it's still balanced. Thanks though.
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  Posted on March 20, 2014 09:21
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- About the grammar
If you find any mistake, report it so I can fix that. I am Italian, you woul help me in improving my English

There should be "would"
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