Kabutomaru (S)


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  Posted on January 14, 2014 20:51
LegendG4MER
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Tips, suggestions and constructive criticism are welcome!
Ignore errors in translation because I use Google Translator! I'm Brazilian ^ ^ but I'm working my English.
Char created using Universal Creator
Picture by: Sorina-Hokage

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In Edo Tensei Technique:
... their will take an additional 5 affliction damage permanet, this stacks. This skill turns in Edo Tensei Preparation when used. (problem on program)
My best 2 chars ~ Meus 2 melhores chars

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Others chars ~ Outros chars

Captain Monga (S) ~ Kabutomaru (S) ~ Iõ (S) ~ Chiyo (S)


~ Sorry for the mistakes in english, I am Brazilian ~
  Posted on January 14, 2014 20:54
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I don't belive that these are from sorina cuz these pics are really bad

Pretty balanced I guess

5/10
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  Posted on January 14, 2014 20:59
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Pics are so good they got me wet

I hope you understand sarcasm.

+ Did you know that making shit loads of alternate skills doesn't add much flow ... yea ._.

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  Posted on January 14, 2014 21:03
LegendG4MER
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NarutoSasuke22 wrote:
I don't belive that these are from sorina cuz these pics are really bad

Pretty balanced I guess

5/10

I took print of the screenshots of Sorina-Hokage, something quite pathetic but I did it because my pc is too slow :)
My best 2 chars ~ Meus 2 melhores chars

DuI8lmn.png W9lUUGn.png

Others chars ~ Outros chars

Captain Monga (S) ~ Kabutomaru (S) ~ Iõ (S) ~ Chiyo (S)


~ Sorry for the mistakes in english, I am Brazilian ~
  Posted on January 14, 2014 21:03
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The chakras are unlike ... 6.0/10.00
  Posted on January 14, 2014 21:06
LegendG4MER
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Seebseeb wrote:
Pics are so good they got me wet

I hope you understand sarcasm.

+ Did you know that making shit loads of alternate skills doesn't add much flow ... yea ._.

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sarcarmo not understand much because the translator google is kinda lotion, but thanks for the tip ^^
My best 2 chars ~ Meus 2 melhores chars

DuI8lmn.png W9lUUGn.png

Others chars ~ Outros chars

Captain Monga (S) ~ Kabutomaru (S) ~ Iõ (S) ~ Chiyo (S)


~ Sorry for the mistakes in english, I am Brazilian ~
  Posted on January 14, 2014 23:35
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pretty good 6/10 .
  Posted on January 14, 2014 23:43
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10/10
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  Posted on January 17, 2014 22:09
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8/10 well thinked, that a char that misses on the game
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  Posted on January 23, 2014 23:05
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#10
Make simpler description to fit and edo tensei doesn't add up,10 and 5 damage permanent like amaterasu but with prep+counter so its not damage or just rework
  Posted on January 23, 2014 23:39
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#11
Seebseeb wrote:
Pics are so good they got me wet

I hope you understand sarcasm.

+ Did you know that making shit loads of alternate skills doesn't add much flow ... yea ._.

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agree ^