Juubi Obito


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  Posted on November 29, 2013 16:25
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Yea and CnC. No Rates just CnC's if i see a blank rate you will be reported.

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  Posted on November 29, 2013 16:36
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7/10 .
  Posted on November 29, 2013 16:38
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elio1234 wrote:
7/10 .
ignored. and reported for spamming plain rates on multiple of my cc topics and i never asked for them.
  Posted on November 29, 2013 16:41
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well made 8/10, maybe abit underpowered considering what he uses. abit of a spoiler topic though
  Posted on November 29, 2013 16:44
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aab2 wrote:
well made 8/10, maybe abit underpowered considering what he uses. abit of a spoiler topic though
ignored this is not a CnC read what i said in the first post.
  Posted on November 29, 2013 16:47
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Bleh 7 / 10

Like The Delayed Effects

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  Posted on November 29, 2013 16:48
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You people cant read for shit o.o

I like the delay effect and the last skill gives the character a wow factor. Maybe have it cost 1 random though. Otherwise, really nice
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  Posted on November 29, 2013 16:52
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needs more chakra in the skills ..
i like who Chakra Ball works !
n' facepic looks nice :D
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  Posted on November 29, 2013 16:53
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  Posted on November 29, 2013 17:04
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Character making so serious
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  Posted on November 29, 2013 17:07
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Atleast add spoiler in the title :suspicious

Nice flow but the 3rd and 4th skills are OP. Add a random chakra on the second and third skills. Change the fourth skill, its way too OP.
  Posted on November 29, 2013 17:33
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Some people never read, I know the feeling.

I like it! It fairly flows together, although that fourth skill is overpowered. Also, I think that facepic can be better (lacks quality). Anyway it's a good creation.
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  Posted on November 29, 2013 17:59
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I though i made myself clear when i asked for not rates. anyways thx all your suggestions are helpful
  Posted on November 29, 2013 18:51
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TerrorBionic wrote:
needs more chakra in the skills ..
i like who Chakra Ball works !
n' facepic looks nice :D
yh maybe you should add a diffrent chakra cost maybe a gen or nin
bnut overall nice character the effect are really good
  Posted on November 29, 2013 19:03
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