Edo Tensei Dan Kato (S) + Mission


 Topic: Edo Tensei Dan Kato (S) + Mission
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  Posted on November 28, 2013 17:19
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Fp by RuneFang
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  Posted on November 28, 2013 17:22
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#2
its balanced. 8/10 needs better pics though
  Posted on November 28, 2013 17:24
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Not bad :suspicious 7/10 :amused
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  Posted on November 28, 2013 17:25
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#4
8/10 Nice char. :amused
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  Posted on November 28, 2013 17:26
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#5
A good character, with balanced skills ... As Delax said .. needs better pictures
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  Posted on November 28, 2013 17:28
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#6
The name is the first thing I see incorrect. I think this Dan not Fuu.

The Facepic shouldn't be centered like that it should be the face looking up or down or to the side.

Spirit Transform needs a cooldown or Rabbit needs a cooldown. Possible both.

The Images for the skills, besides the facepic, are okay but could be sharpened a bit more

Overall I give this work a 5/10
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  Posted on November 28, 2013 17:36
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Bad Pics ..
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  Posted on November 28, 2013 17:36
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I improved, I took a template from Fuu and forgot to change the excuse :embarressed
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  Posted on November 28, 2013 17:54
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#9
8 improve pics and grammar
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  Posted on November 28, 2013 18:01
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overall 6/10
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  Posted on November 28, 2013 18:03
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8/10 .
  Posted on November 28, 2013 18:13
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7/10. Need better pics.:cool
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  Posted on December 1, 2013 02:40
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Baaad pics, 3
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  Posted on December 9, 2013 10:02
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I corrected and added a mission.
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  Posted on December 9, 2013 13:32
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#15
Chakra transfer pic is stupid. Can someone realize team with dan kato and any MAN ninja? Dan kato kissing orochimaru, naruto,asuma? wtf? idiot.