Nik Productions ♥ Ameyuri Ringo (S)


 Topic: Nik Productions ♥ Ameyuri Ringo (S)
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  Posted on November 17, 2013 19:39
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Hello there! Its been ages since my last character, but I finally found the inspiration and time to finish one of them.

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  Posted on November 17, 2013 19:41
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[2:36:28 PM] das~ emo law: Although it lacks the word counter in place of "ignores and ends", it's a great counter skill. 69/1 because someone said i should rate nik's characters.
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  Posted on November 17, 2013 19:44
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^lol Don't listen to him. This skill cannot be stunned like counter stunning skills like In-game Akebino Jinin's axe and ignores skills that make you invulnerable to counters or reduces the durations of them.
  Posted on November 17, 2013 20:08
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at first i thought the character was op but then i saw the cooldowns,nice job 10/10

  Posted on November 17, 2013 20:11
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Simply put , you're the man . Flawless victory like in Mortal Kombat ....10000/10

Light skin & I fight good just Like Muhammad Ali.....Jab nasty, hook good....just like Muhammad Ali
  Posted on November 17, 2013 20:18
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To much lightning. Unoriginal.
Charging lightning and discharging it. Honestly it's the same thing.

Lightning being yellow highlighted is wacky. Makes me think you don't realize the reader doesn't know which lightning it is. I can understand since all four skills are Lightning....Literally

Outside of actual text, I like the two blue squares for the first skill. after that, everything is black and nothing. I don't like it as much now.


Is Ringo a movie?
  Posted on November 17, 2013 20:24
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sharkninja wrote:
To much lightning. Unoriginal.
Charging lightning and discharging it. Honestly it's the same thing.

Lightning being yellow highlighted is wacky. Makes me think you don't realize the reader doesn't know which lightning it is. I can understand since all four skills are Lightning....Literally

Outside of actual text, I like the two blue squares for the first skill. after that, everything is black and nothing. I don't like it as much now.


Is Ringo a movie?
what xDDD "Too much lightning unoriginal" what i swear this guy is joking :oh. anyways havent seen many characters by you lately, well this one i like partically there are no errors and she is perfectly balanced with a basic flow but still pretty cool. 10/10
  Posted on November 17, 2013 20:28
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Those skill names make Ameyuri look like a damn electric Pokemon. Brilliant.

Thunderbolt should cost a random chakra and deal piercing damage.
All her skills should be classed as unique.
8/10
  Posted on November 17, 2013 20:34
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sharkninja wrote:
To much lightning. Unoriginal.
Charging lightning and discharging it. Honestly it's the same thing.

Lightning being yellow highlighted is wacky. Makes me think you don't realize the reader doesn't know which lightning it is. I can understand since all four skills are Lightning....Literally

Outside of actual text, I like the two blue squares for the first skill. after that, everything is black and nothing. I don't like it as much now.


Is Ringo a movie?
He is right here about the Lightning. It's just too much and nothing else.

1st skill is OP

3 skills are all have the same exact classes is kind of boring.

6-7/10

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  Posted on November 17, 2013 21:16
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9/10 nice char .
  Posted on November 17, 2013 21:35
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Alot Overpower But's she's nice
  Posted on November 17, 2013 21:56
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SasukeChidori93 wrote:
3 skills are all have the same exact classes is kind of boring.
Yeah, there's a reason for that. Initially, if I just removed the additional effect each of her skills has, it would just be overpowered, because they would each have a low cooldown and can be spammed. The way they are though, with the additional cooldown decreasment account, one must mind how to use the skills, in order to pull off their full power. And here's your reason as to why they're so "simple" and "boring". Anything more, and she'll be a powerhouse, when she already is one when you go for the appropriate combo.
I am not the type of guy who would put a bunch of random shit just so they can look more unique. I am making a character based off the Naruto, Soul, and War of Ninja arenas' characters.

As to why all my skills are lightning techniques, it's because I like to have my skills and their effects make some sence when compared to the series. They made sence to me this way, so I did it this way. Thanks everyone for the comments.
  Posted on November 20, 2013 02:34
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nice but 55 damage 9/10
  Posted on November 20, 2013 02:34
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nice but 55 damage 9/10
  Posted on November 20, 2013 02:34
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nice but 55 damage 9/10