Edo Tensei Madara (S) ( Spoiler) + Mission- Corrected


 Topic: Edo Tensei Madara (S) ( Spoiler) + Mission- Corrected
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  Posted on November 11, 2013 10:34
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-Thanks for the pics from radarobert
-Thanks also for the pictures of people I do not remember what I downloaded their long lost photos.
-Please critique
-I have a bad english sorry.
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  Posted on November 11, 2013 10:45
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Where is Hijutsu Mukotan:Jukai Kotan, Mokuton Kajukai Korin and mission is very hard....
but good character I guess
8/10 :amused
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  Posted on November 11, 2013 10:55
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-GodSaveMe- wrote:
Where is Hijutsu Mukotan:Jukai Kotan, Mokuton Kajukai Korin and mission is very hard....
but good character I guess
8/10 :amused

A difficult mission because strong character and Thanks for rating :)
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  Posted on November 11, 2013 11:02
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Finally the first mission that requires a rank of Jinchuuriki.
Nice character and like -GodSaveMe- said where are the skills.
And I prefer an invulnerable skill or something that is friendly skills to him or his allies.

8/10

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  Posted on November 11, 2013 11:17
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8/10... no sussanoo skill?

great mission requirement:amused
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  Posted on November 11, 2013 11:19
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bad pics bad grammar all wood style skills should be physical i think,wood clones OP
6/10
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  Posted on November 11, 2013 11:46
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adragon360 wrote:
8/10... no sussanoo skill?

great mission requirement:amused
I'll do separately Edo Tensei Madara Susano. Today I think I will ;)
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  Posted on November 11, 2013 11:49
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#8
Wor on the grammar, for example on the wood clone move attack description it reads "goes on every enemy" it should say along the lines of "effects the enemy team". DNA Senju also seems a OP, change 3 turns seems more reasonable.

Besides a few errors, the character seems balance.
7.7/10
  Posted on November 11, 2013 14:52
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I hope that now better? I'm starting ET Susano Madara (S) :laugh
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  Posted on March 17, 2014 17:39
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9/10
Very cool character, very creative
  Posted on March 17, 2014 17:45
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Nice character, 8/10 :amused