Rate and cnc


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  Posted on November 10, 2013 14:03
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its a little train

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  Posted on November 10, 2013 14:07
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i like the effects 8.5/10 could use more brightness though
  Posted on November 10, 2013 14:08
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Don't center your focal. It's really dark and plain on the right side, the wireframe looks kind of weird, the render doesn't really blend well and the quality of it isn't that great.
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  Posted on November 10, 2013 14:12
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4/10.

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  Posted on November 10, 2013 14:30
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#5
It has depth i'd give you that.
its lacking the basic idea of the rule of thirds.
the right side could be fixed.
overall it has some major flaws that could be easily fixed.

on a side note, are you interested in making a collab with me sometime?
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  Posted on November 10, 2013 14:55
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7/10
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  Posted on November 10, 2013 15:17
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#7
You need to work on blending the render in more better.
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  Posted on November 10, 2013 15:31
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#8
It's really nice just work with blending a little bit more and it'll be perfect.
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