Yondaime Raikage (S) + Mission


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  Posted on October 9, 2013 10:36
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  Posted on October 9, 2013 10:39
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5/10.
So UP, to even use your skills you have to get a nin + random, and even if that it only lasts a few rounds.
Work on your Grammar & Spelling as well.
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  Posted on October 9, 2013 10:43
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Up
Bad grammar
Bad pics
Font is kinda blurry
Lots of spelling mistakes
Wrong classes on some skills

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  Posted on October 9, 2013 11:56
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pretty much everything said above, he just wouldnt get play because he's just too slow
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  Posted on October 9, 2013 12:07
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the character description doesnt sound good

The Yondaime Raikage is the fourth raikage..

work on grammar and balancing

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  Posted on October 9, 2013 13:34
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  Posted on October 9, 2013 14:11
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lord_jiraiya wrote:
the character description doesnt sound good

The Yondaime Raikage is the fourth raikage..

work on grammar and balancing

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Ichi ni san yon
yon=4
  Posted on October 9, 2013 14:34
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a bit weak for me 7/10
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