Shikamaru (W) by Spike


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  Posted on October 8, 2013 00:08
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Lazy_Genius_13 wrote:
- Character: Shikamaru Nara
- Anime: Naruto Shippuden
- Episode(S): Should be Shippuden Episode 303-305/6, his fight versus the revived Sound Four
- Specification: No stuns to make it a tad more challenging I hope...oh, additionally I'd like permission to use the facepic as an avatar if it ends up something beautiful.

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  Posted on October 8, 2013 00:09
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900/10
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  Posted on October 8, 2013 00:10
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  Posted on October 8, 2013 00:15
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Pretty interesting take on Shika, 8/10

Also, just a heads up:




  Posted on October 8, 2013 00:16
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Second/third skill is messed up.
8/10
  Posted on October 8, 2013 00:16
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KaosKilla9231 wrote:
Pretty interesting take on Shika, 8/10

Also, just a heads up:




I'll fix it. Thanks for heads up.
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  Posted on October 8, 2013 00:47
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wow guys really you couldn't just cnc or properly rate this character. bunch of post hunters.

anyways first thing is first grammar, the third skill i think could be written way better especially towards the end of the skill. that's all for grammar. second the concept and flow, the concept is a bit dull and overused i mean the "deal 5 more damage" thing tends to be in every character, not saying it is bad but it is overused and loses a bit of its creativity in characters unless they have a better unqiue flow which this one does not have, about the flow not much in it except for the 1st skill. now on creativity it is nicely done. about the balance he is up try raising his second skill to deal 20 damage and reduce the enemies skills by 50% instead of 25%. thats all really my rate is 5.5/10 hope this helps you next time.
  Posted on October 8, 2013 00:48
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  Posted on October 8, 2013 00:50
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delax321 wrote:
wow guys really you couldn't just cnc or properly rate this character. bunch of post hunters.

anyways first thing is first grammar, the third skill i think could be written way better especially towards the end of the skill. that's all for grammar. second the concept and flow, the concept is a bit dull and overused i mean the "deal 5 more damage" thing tends to be in every character, not saying it is bad but it is overused and loses a bit of its creativity in characters unless they have a better unqiue flow which this one does not have, about the flow not much in it except for the 1st skill. now on creativity it is nicely done. about the balance he is up try raising his second skill to deal 20 damage and reduce the enemies skills by 50% instead of 25%. thats all really my rate is 5.5/10 hope this helps you next time.
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  Posted on October 8, 2013 00:58
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Delax62124 wrote:
delax321 wrote:
wow guys really you couldn't just cnc or properly rate this character. bunch of post hunters.

anyways first thing is first grammar, the third skill i think could be written way better especially towards the end of the skill. that's all for grammar. second the concept and flow, the concept is a bit dull and overused i mean the "deal 5 more damage" thing tends to be in every character, not saying it is bad but it is overused and loses a bit of its creativity in characters unless they have a better unqiue flow which this one does not have, about the flow not much in it except for the 1st skill. now on creativity it is nicely done. about the balance he is up try raising his second skill to deal 20 damage and reduce the enemies skills by 50% instead of 25%. thats all really my rate is 5.5/10 hope this helps you next time.
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No, is not be a hater, is just helping him with CnC

And agreed with him, the idea is veeeeeeery used, try to be more original next time, or at least, try to change that idea with another way

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  Posted on October 8, 2013 01:30
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10/10
  Posted on October 8, 2013 01:48
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delax321 wrote:
wow guys really you couldn't just cnc or properly rate this character. bunch of post hunters.

anyways first thing is first grammar, the third skill i think could be written way better especially towards the end of the skill. that's all for grammar. second the concept and flow, the concept is a bit dull and overused i mean the "deal 5 more damage" thing tends to be in every character, not saying it is bad but it is overused and loses a bit of its creativity in characters unless they have a better unqiue flow which this one does not have, about the flow not much in it except for the 1st skill. now on creativity it is nicely done. about the balance he is up try raising his second skill to deal 20 damage and reduce the enemies skills by 50% instead of 25%. thats all really my rate is 5.5/10 hope this helps you next time.
hate to be a dick to you, but, you're just undeniably foolish. let me lay this out for you, you criticize how people are cnc'ing this guys character, but, you mention grammar then fuck your typing over pretty much 100% (anyways first thing is first grammar)
as for the "overused" issue, there isn't much you can do with a character due to the fact you have to keep them balanced and switching words around won't help. neither will increasing damage or deducting damage or even creating a more unique skill because that usually becomes very confusing since it will be linking to other skills. "about the flow there isn't much except for the first skill" what the actual fuck are you even talking about? if something has flow such as graphics, there isn't just one point of flow, flow is a current, multiple pieces therefore you would mean "there is no flow" and I don't even understand flow in a character tbh, just sounds like some shit you'd say to seem a bit more intelligent or say to others to make character creating sound cooler and has nothing to do with the character itself such as when people suggest better pictures. it has nothing to do with the actual characters and it's not a real character is it? not at all. you mentioned the flow and how it loses creativity, you also mention this character has no flow except for the first skill yet you then state that the creativity is nicely done? don't want to get warned over some kid who threw out a long post knowing not of what he speaks instead of simply giving his thoughts on the characters skills.

as for the character, I dig the differentials in skills compared to our shikamaru s.
10/10
  Posted on October 8, 2013 02:05
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8/10 e.e
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  Posted on October 8, 2013 02:11
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8/10 .
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  Posted on October 8, 2013 02:13
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LSDarko wrote:
delax321 wrote:
wow guys really you couldn't just cnc or properly rate this character. bunch of post hunters.

anyways first thing is first grammar, the third skill i think could be written way better especially towards the end of the skill. that's all for grammar. second the concept and flow, the concept is a bit dull and overused i mean the "deal 5 more damage" thing tends to be in every character, not saying it is bad but it is overused and loses a bit of its creativity in characters unless they have a better unqiue flow which this one does not have, about the flow not much in it except for the 1st skill. now on creativity it is nicely done. about the balance he is up try raising his second skill to deal 20 damage and reduce the enemies skills by 50% instead of 25%. thats all really my rate is 5.5/10 hope this helps you next time.
hate to be a dick to you, but, you're just undeniably foolish. let me lay this out for you, you criticize how people are cnc'ing this guys character, but, you mention grammar then fuck your typing over pretty much 100% (anyways first thing is first grammar)
as for the "overused" issue, there isn't much you can do with a character due to the fact you have to keep them balanced and switching words around won't help. neither will increasing damage or deducting damage or even creating a more unique skill because that usually becomes very confusing since it will be linking to other skills. "about the flow there isn't much except for the first skill" what the actual fuck are you even talking about? if something has flow such as graphics, there isn't just one point of flow, flow is a current, multiple pieces therefore you would mean "there is no flow" and I don't even understand flow in a character tbh, just sounds like some shit you'd say to seem a bit more intelligent or say to others to make character creating sound cooler and has nothing to do with the character itself such as when people suggest better pictures. it has nothing to do with the actual characters and it's not a real character is it? not at all. you mentioned the flow and how it loses creativity, you also mention this character has no flow except for the first skill yet you then state that the creativity is nicely done? don't want to get warned over some kid who threw out a long post knowing not of what he speaks instead of simply giving his thoughts on the characters skills.

as for the character, I dig the differentials in skills compared to our shikamaru s.
10/10
People refer flow to be how the skills fit with each other. Just that their not random skills, but they all connect in some way. How they flow through the character and go together. To have flow would mean you would have to be creative. Also, i agree with you, the +5 to his skills might be overused, but it doesn't mean it doesnt make the character creative or good. It's merely a overused skill because it's obviously a good one to balance a character out.
Also, since i didn't make the pics, that shouldn't even be considered in your CnC tbh.

Thx for rate everyone else.
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