Pain and Toku Presents || Dodai


 Topic: Pain and Toku Presents || Dodai
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  Posted on September 27, 2013 22:46
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My wrote:
Classes

Harmful / Beneficial

Offensive / Defensive

Instant / Durable

Special / Normal

I will not use ranged or melee classes.

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Energy

Clan's Technique --> All skills that are from the clan of the user.
Elemental Technique --> All elemental skills (Exemple: Doton, Katon, Suiton, Fuuton, Raiton and other Kekkei Genkai). Also skills that release offensive substances.
Illusion --> Genjutsus, Illusions, Mental skills, Mists, Dimensional techniques, Analysis, Doujutsus, Fuuinjutsus, Kinjutsus, Hijutsus.
Tool --> All skills that use an object to have effect.
Individual Combat --> All skills that affects physically, melee.

Pain_Alagoano wrote:
-Rates 7 or less if not explained will be ignored.
-OP, UP or balanced?
-Rate and comment please.

Pain_Alagoano wrote:
-Sorry for the grammar mistakes.
-Pics by Radarobert.

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  Posted on September 27, 2013 22:51
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How does Rubber Ball deal damage o.o, it shields allies. Btw its picture should be facing the other way :noworry, 1st skill is up if no tool damage is used on him.I don't understand 2nd skill.

Overall no real concept, trying to be too creative and I don't like the pics :(.

6.7/10
  Posted on September 27, 2013 22:55
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Dead_Deidera wrote:
How does Rubber Ball deal damage o.o, it shields allies. Btw its picture should be facing the other way :noworry, 1st skill is up if no tool damage is used on him.I don't understand 2nd skill.

Overall no real concept, trying to be too creative and I don't like the pics :(.

6.7/10

Really on the anime Rubber Ball only target allies, but it can target enemies and deal damage. Reread the second skill and understand.

And I think these pics are much better than the other Dodai pics.

Even so, thanks.
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  Posted on September 27, 2013 22:56
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I don't believe Toku is your partner anymore, :c
We agreed that he would like to be partners :3

Anyway, the pics quality and cropping can improve. If you have the chance, learn to get inspired of skills, and new ways to make a flow in your balancing. If you balance a character, make sure your character has the right chakra system. Get your own type of characteristic flow.
7 / 10, you can do better.

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  Posted on September 27, 2013 22:57
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-ObitoSensai14- wrote:
I don't believe Toku is your partner anymore, :c
We agreed that he would like to be partners :3

Anyway, the pics quality and cropping can improve. If you have the chance, learn to get inspired of skills, and new ways to make a flow in your balancing. If you balance a character, make sure your character has the right chakra system. Get your own type of characteristic flow.
7 / 10, you can do better.

About me being partner of Toku, it is an offense against me?
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  Posted on September 27, 2013 22:58
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I simply like the Character Pain. Fucking awesome character dude.
Pics are always perfect well cause they are from rada xD
10.
  Posted on September 27, 2013 22:58
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Pain_Alagoano wrote:
Dead_Deidera wrote:
How does Rubber Ball deal damage o.o, it shields allies. Btw its picture should be facing the other way :noworry, 1st skill is up if no tool damage is used on him.I don't understand 2nd skill.

Overall no real concept, trying to be too creative and I don't like the pics :(.

6.7/10

Really on the anime Rubber Ball only target allies, but it can target enemies and deal damage. Reread the second skill and understand.

And I think these pics are much better than the other Dodai pics.

Even so, thanks.
How can being inside a Rubber Ball damage you o.o You can only use 2nd skill twice? Cause it says if you use it twice it does this but it doesn't do it permanently? Confusing character not much making sense sorry not your best character comparing to other chars you made. Btw I don't think Toku is your partner anymore as Obito said o.o
  Posted on September 27, 2013 23:00
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iTokubetsu wrote:
I simply like the Character Pain. Fucking awesome character dude.
Pics are always perfect well cause they are from rada xD
10.

Yep. Rada is perfect on pics. And thanks Toku. ><
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  Posted on September 27, 2013 23:03
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Dead_Deidera wrote:
Pain_Alagoano wrote:
Dead_Deidera wrote:
How does Rubber Ball deal damage o.o, it shields allies. Btw its picture should be facing the other way :noworry, 1st skill is up if no tool damage is used on him.I don't understand 2nd skill.

Overall no real concept, trying to be too creative and I don't like the pics :(.

6.7/10

Really on the anime Rubber Ball only target allies, but it can target enemies and deal damage. Reread the second skill and understand.

And I think these pics are much better than the other Dodai pics.

Even so, thanks.
How can being inside a Rubber Ball damage you o.o You can only use 2nd skill twice? Cause it says if you use it twice it does this but it doesn't do it permanently? Confusing character not much making sense sorry not your best character comparing to other chars you made. Btw I don't think Toku is your partner anymore as Obito said o.o

Second skill: On the second use, gives 25, after this, gives 15 again. Can be used more times. And I do not understand. Toku is really very good on pics and characters, but I cannot be your partner? Why?
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  Posted on September 27, 2013 23:36
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7/10 .
  Posted on September 28, 2013 03:23
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Personagem confuso... A 3° Skill não devia causar dano, é uma skill aliada... Bem, ficou meio sem sentido o personagem, mas, boa tentativa.

7/10
  Posted on October 21, 2013 02:50
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  Posted on December 21, 2013 12:09
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7/10 ; N-A One seems more useful