Yuhi Kurenai


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  Posted on September 20, 2013 20:23
LuizeduDeidara
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This is my second CC. If you want to see my first char,click on his face pic below from this post. All pics by me. Rate pics,skills,flow,creativity,originality,class,balance,grammar,etc., and CnC.
All N-B rules apply. If you rate under 7, please explain.



Abbreviations: Dmg:Damage, Aff:Affliction, TBD:Tree binding death, VI:Vanishing illusion, FPE:Flower petal escape, FPS: Flower petal suffocation, DR: Damage reduction.

How "invisible health" works - For example, if Kurenai is using VI and has 80 Health points, and one enemy use a skill that deals 20 piercing damage, the damage will be applied normally,but,the enemy will see like if Kurenai's health was not affected. The same apply if she go healed back to 100 health.

Edit:I have changed the invul pic.
  Posted on September 20, 2013 20:47
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Original, but i can't see the 4th pic, so 6/10
  Posted on September 20, 2013 20:53
LuizeduDeidara
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ashketchum0123 wrote:
Original, but i can't see the 4th pic, so 6/10
Because is a camouflage
Maybe is a little dark. Anyway,thanks.
  Posted on September 21, 2013 20:13
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ashketchum0123 wrote:
Original, but i can't see the 4th pic, so 6/10

I'm agreed with him, is camuoflage.. but is so fucking dark D:!

I like the FP

the pics are very dark and LQ-MQ, sorry

The grammar can be better

is OP
i mean, the skills are invisible, counter, permanently affliction damage, and DR?

Suggestions:
TBD is fine
a bit slow, but fine

VI, control class, and lasts 2 turns.

FPS, 10 affliction damage, and everytime, if the enemy gets a friendly skill, the skill deals 5 more damage. ends if kurenai is stunned or she dies

but, not so bad idea

overall: 6

~By Kenny


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  Posted on September 21, 2013 20:21
LuizeduDeidara
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Narutorazengan25 wrote:
ashketchum0123 wrote:
Original, but i can't see the 4th pic, so 6/10

I'm agreed with him, is camuoflage.. but is so fucking dark D:!

I like the FP

the pics are very dark and LQ-MQ, sorry

The grammar can be better

is OP
i mean, the skills are invisible, counter, permanently affliction damage, and DR?

Suggestions:
TBD is fine
a bit slow, but fine

VI, control class, and lasts 2 turns.

FPS, 10 affliction damage, and everytime, if the enemy gets a friendly skill, the skill deals 5 more damage. ends if kurenai is stunned or she dies

but, not so bad idea

overall: 6

~By Kenny


Thanks for rating. And FPS can only be used on enemies countered by FPE,so, you need to counter the enemy every time you want to use FPS on him/her, and if she is stunned or die the skill ends. I'll try to improve.
  Posted on October 18, 2013 21:43
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7/10
the pics is not verry good and too much genjutsu...X_X