Obito Uchiha (S) || By Rasengan_89


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  Posted on September 16, 2013 21:11
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Hello there.
Comments like "Bad skills" "6.1/10" "wtf lol" will be ignored.

I have made it, at last.
Enjoy yhe Second Sage of the Six paths: Obito Uchiha


Chakra Usage: Only Random Chakra.

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Here you are some notes before you comment:
- About the skills
Just define OP and UP and how should I change it.
- About the grammar
If you find any mistake, report it so I can fix that. I am Italian, you would help me in improving my English
- About the CnC
I want to read them. Without them I cant improve the character and myself

Credits go to:
- Rasengan_89 (me) for editing the pictures and making the characters.


Thanks to everyone who comments :)

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  Posted on September 16, 2013 21:21
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7 :oh cuz he can't deal real damage :suspicious
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  Posted on September 16, 2013 21:23
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Twenty21 wrote:
7 :oh cuz he can't deal real damage :suspicious

Thats a stupid comment. Not all chars are ment to be full fledged attackers.

I give it 10/10. He's perfect for the role he fufils an amazing support char
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  Posted on September 16, 2013 21:24
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Twenty21 wrote:
7 :oh cuz he can't deal real damage :suspicious

He's right, i was hoping for like a 300 damage move xD, but honestly all skills are random and his 4th skill is way too OP
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  Posted on September 16, 2013 21:25
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3rd skill has a mistake
instead of juubi u said juuni other than that....:cry you make great characters 10/10
  Posted on September 16, 2013 21:25
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Rage of the God tree should be 10 piercing each bloodline/nin if you're going to make it cost 3 random chakra.
  Posted on September 16, 2013 21:33
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ashketchum0123 wrote:
Twenty21 wrote:
7 :oh cuz he can't deal real damage :suspicious

He's right, i was hoping for like a 300 damage move xD, but honestly all skills are random and his 4th skill is way too OP
Please, go back catching pokemons.
God may have Mercy of you for not understanding custom characters.
Kiba-akamaru-12 wrote:
3rd skill has a mistake
instead of juubi u said juuni other than that....:cry you make great characters 10/10
Ill fix it, thanks :D
DDR-Ninja wrote:
Twenty21 wrote:
7 :oh cuz he can't deal real damage :suspicious

Thats a stupid comment. Not all chars are ment to be full fledged attackers.

I give it 10/10. He's perfect for the role he fufils an amazing support char
Thanks, but he is not a supporter, he is meant to be a slow killer :V
I mean, to kill you by exasperating the game, because you cant kill him.
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Rage of the God tree should be 10 piercing each bloodline/nin if you're going to make it cost 3 random chakra.
Might do
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  Posted on September 16, 2013 21:36
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  Posted on September 16, 2013 22:07
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I could count the ways this CC isn't any good, let me count the ways; first and foremost, you should stick to watching Pokemon yourself who can't even make a unique character, you both go hand in hand, same bland format with different pokemon every episode.

Although i like your first skill, I really do, it was done very well, but the other 3 are pretty bad. All moves are random for a god like shinobi, it seems like you took the easy way out, face pic is excellent, a suggestion for the 3rd skill is to make it take all chakra in the pool to your team and increase one random chakra for Obito.

I could go on forever about the spelling/grammer, other mistakes and suggestions, but you claim you don't know english as much, so b4 insulting some1, you should know your place, i was being nice first time around, you caught feelings somehow, gl on your other characters, hope you do well and you shouldn't be in any position making jokes about Pokemon, when there is more variety in pokemon than your Obito character.

Yous still got a ways to go..

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  Posted on September 17, 2013 08:02
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ashketchum0123 wrote:
I could count the ways this CC isn't any good, let me count the ways; first and foremost, you should stick to watching Pokemon yourself who can't even make a unique character, you both go hand in hand, same bland format with different pokemon every episode.

Although i like your first skill, I really do, it was done very well, but the other 3 are pretty bad. All moves are random for a god like shinobi, it seems like you took the easy way out, face pic is excellent, a suggestion for the 3rd skill is to make it take all chakra in the pool to your team and increase one random chakra for Obito.

I could go on forever about the spelling/grammer, other mistakes and suggestions, but you claim you don't know english as much, so b4 insulting some1, you should know your place, i was being nice first time around, you caught feelings somehow, gl on your other characters, hope you do well and you shouldn't be in any position making jokes about Pokemon, when there is more variety in pokemon than your Obito character.

Yous still got a ways to go..
If your English is better than mine, show me my mistakes and I'll fix them then.
You say my character has no originality, skills are random, well let me show you how it works.
Its passive grants him total immunity to any kind of damage but CHAKRA skills. If you hit him with those, he becomes vulnerable to all skills. Fine?
Fine.
So how can we turn around this point? With the first skill you want to target the enemy's character who uses mainly chakra skills, this way even if he damages you, you wouldn't be losing a lot of health. Second skill makes enemies vulnerable to everything, your whole team may target enemies with any kind of action skill without being afraid of almost anything (exception made for counters etc etc). Also, for 2 turns they can only target you: imagine a full physical aoe team or anything which is not chakra :)
Did I say action skills?
Oh, the first one is action, so it would go on with no problems.
Also, while the second skill is active you are 100% sure to hit your enemy team with his third skill: you remove all his ninjutsu and bloodline chakra (used for chakra skills :amused ) and deal damage to each one per chakra removed.
Also, all of his skill cannot be denied, meaning that cannot be countered or reflected or anything else which makes his skills not happen. Also, his damage is piercing but cannot be reduced (see Hachibi for instance).
Last thing: if he doesn't get damaged for three turns in a row, he heals himself. Completely. If this is not a godlike character idk.

If this character sounds random to you after this short explanation, well, not my problem.
I'm not the best character maker but I know right what I am doing :blink
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  Posted on September 17, 2013 08:13
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I like it even though he doesn't deal much damage he is really good for support, especially with a chakra stealing character although the 2nd skill obito will surely die at that time.
9/10
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  Posted on September 17, 2013 08:20
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kyle354 wrote:
I like it even though he doesn't deal much damage he is really good for support, especially with a chakra stealing character although the 2nd skill obito will surely die at that time.
9/10

Read the passive... (4th skill)
Thanks anyway.
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  Posted on September 17, 2013 11:57
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Nice, but I think that the fourth skill must only grant invulnerability for a turn at a cost of one random chakra. The barrier should only disallow the foes to go invulnerable and the bijuudama should only be reflected, but not countered.
  Posted on September 17, 2013 12:31
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I think the completely heal thing with 3 turns and no cost is op, maybe if you put it like a ninjutsu and when his health drops to like 25 he heals like 25-35 health or w/e you want to put it at. Otherwise not that bad just a TINY bit op so I give it a 8/10.
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  Posted on September 17, 2013 13:12
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Dead_Deidera wrote:
I think the completely heal thing with 3 turns and no cost is op, maybe if you put it like a ninjutsu and when his health drops to like 25 he heals like 25-35 health or w/e you want to put it at. Otherwise not that bad just a TINY bit op so I give it a 8/10.
Hardly ever a character is not damaged within three turns, considering that he has no invulnerability and no counter and he is vulnerable to 1/3 of the skill of the game... I think it's fine.
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