Sarutobi Konohamaru (S) | by Warriormental


 Topic: Sarutobi Konohamaru (S) | by Warriormental
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  Posted on September 3, 2013 01:25
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#1
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This is my first char guys, I accept all critiques and comments!
Hope you like!

It's very simple but.. yeah and that rasengan pic is horrible I know

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  Posted on September 3, 2013 01:43
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#2
Rasengan should't deal piercing damage because he still learned it new. Othereise it's ok.
Edit: sorry forgot to tell that his Kage Bunshin need a cost increased or cooldown increased

9/10

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  Posted on September 3, 2013 01:51
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Tigersnow wrote:
Rasengan should't deal piercing damage because he still learned it new. Othereise it's ok.
Edit: sorry forgot to tell that his Kage Bunshin need a cost increased or cooldown increased

9/10

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Thank you!
But I mean, with that rasengan Konohamaru really got one Pein so piercing should be fine I guess.

I edited a little bit:
- Rasengan has past to 1 cooldown and costs 2 ninjutsus because of 'piercing' and stun;
- Kage Bunshin no Jutsu has now 2 cooldown.
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  Posted on September 3, 2013 02:39
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8/10 kunais throw is under powered
  Posted on September 3, 2013 02:44
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yami-gami wrote:
8/10 kunais throw is under powered

This is a basic character shouldn't be that OP And the Rasengan I think is OP enough ahah
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  Posted on September 3, 2013 02:57
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  Posted on September 3, 2013 15:01
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#7
Improve Kunai throw

In N-A its not about being a basic character or not its about the originality.
Nagato for example is weaker then Young Sasuke in N-A

Rasengan is OK
Kage Bunshin is Nice

8.5/10

Improve some pics and originality.
  Posted on September 3, 2013 15:13
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#8
m7amado wrote:
Improve Kunai throw

In N-A its not about being a basic character or not its about the originality.
Nagato for example is weaker then Young Sasuke in N-A

Rasengan is OK
Kage Bunshin is Nice

8.5/10

Improve some pics and originality.

Thank you
Kunais should deal 25 damage ?
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  Posted on September 3, 2013 15:17
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#9
9 for your first and Kunais should deal 25 dmg btw really nice char
  Posted on September 3, 2013 15:28
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#10
Nice char but the pics are a little laim and you should improve Kunais Throw up to 25.
8/10
  Posted on September 3, 2013 15:42
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lester59 wrote:
9 for your first and Kunais should deal 25 dmg btw really nice char
sirius97 wrote:
Nice char but the pics are a little laim and you should improve Kunais Throw up to 25.
8/10

Thank you both,

I edited again:
- Kunais Throw now deal 25 damage to one enemy.
- Edited pic on Rasengan!

Hope you like it better that the other one.
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  Posted on September 3, 2013 15:48
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#12
pretty nice character. awesome pics. well balanced. 9/10
  Posted on September 6, 2013 23:55
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#13
Good job . 9/10

  Posted on September 7, 2013 15:10
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#14
ronak_thakker wrote:
pretty nice character. awesome pics. well balanced. 9/10
armagedon1998 wrote:
Good job . 9/10

Thank you
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  Posted on September 7, 2013 15:16
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#15
9 because it's your first try, I think rasengan is a bit weak, it could stun physical instead and there are a few grammar mistakes, but apart from that, good job
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