Mangekyou Sharingan Sasuke (S)


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  Posted on July 27, 2013 17:13
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Follow these rules otherwise your comment will be counted as spam.
-Don't rip, flame, spam or harass in comments
-If rates are below 8 and not explained they will be ignored and counted spam.
-If you are to lazy to read these rules or read my whole char then don't rate at all
-If you are rating pics your comment is ignored.
Thats all for the rules now please sit back and enjoy my character then leave your comment.
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  Posted on July 27, 2013 17:18
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lol that face (XD)
10/10
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  Posted on July 27, 2013 17:19
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7.5 bad pics
  Posted on July 27, 2013 17:21
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nice dude i rate 5.8/10 good work but doont look realistic
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  Posted on July 27, 2013 17:21
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ultio wrote:
7.5 bad pics
This ignored pics don't matter to me since I did not make them. :oh
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  Posted on July 27, 2013 17:22
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GamerDude500 wrote:
nice dude i rate 5.8/10 good work but doont look realistic
Ignored its not suppose to look exactly like N-A's work its a custom character "custom".
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  Posted on July 27, 2013 17:22
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great char 7/10
bad pics.(except chidori)
sorry dude ready the rating rule pics count for rating.
there are many players working on pics ask them for pics when you need them.
other than that very nice char
  Posted on July 27, 2013 17:25
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ashik-tonmoy wrote:
great char 7/10
bad pics.(except chidori)
sorry dude ready the rating rule pics count for rating.
there are many players working on pics ask them for pics when you need them.
other than that very nice char

This is ignored, I said in rules not to rate pics :sick, stop following everyone else.
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  Posted on July 27, 2013 18:06
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Hidan-I-I-I- wrote:
Ignored its not suppose to look exactly like N-A's work its a custom character "custom".

We have to have something to compare it to though. If not characters in-game then we have to start comparing them to other ones, which means we'd all be screwed :sick

Punctuation: 7/10
Character Description: You don't need the random comma.
Suusano Activation: The name should be Susanoo or Susano'o (the first is more known and used though). Ameretsu should be Amaterasu.
Ameretsu: The skill's name should be Amaterasu.
Suusano Defense: You need to add the (S) to his name.
Suusano Crush: Look at Suusano Activation for the naming problem. It should be 'themselves' instead of 'their self'.
Remember to add 'Mission:' before the mission title. Also, add '(this is a stun effect)' next to skills that stop enemies from using friendly skills.

Pictures: N/A
You said not to rate pics so I won't. Word of advice though: If you're using Custom Character Creator, you can change the picture boxes to be 77x77, bordered. Just go Options-> Your Pictures Are-> 77x77, bordered. It'll fix the double borders and picture quality.
Pictures are part of the skill so don't get offended when someone says they don't look good. Also, don't just ignore some good advice just because you didn't make the pics.

Skills: 7/10
Not an overall original character and kind of lackluster. He seems like a friendly skill stunner, which is new (For me anyway).
Suusano Activation is his obvious defensive skill but I think you could do something more with it. 25 DD for 3 turns has been overused. Give it something more interesting like some DD+specific class immunity/Reduced Damage or something. Anything is more interesting than 25 DD.
I like the idea of reapplying the extra damage for chidori but it seems kind of random on this character (unless you were trying for all-skill deterrent?).
Ameretsu shouldn't be genjutsu. Not only is it obviously a ninjutsu but it's very random on a nin-blood character like this one. I like the ability to move damage over by friendly skills since it'll stop health teams pretty quickly.
Dark Bringer is kind of like Chidori with the opposite effect. I'm not an fan of how simple it is but the ability to ignore friendly skills makes it useful for invisible skill runners.
Suusano Crush has the same problem as Dark Bringer but I like the secondary effect.

Overall: 7/10
Very simple but effective character. I could see this one being used pretty easily. Maybe give it an interesting extra ability though (we love crazy creativity)?