Sofi's Productions: Sasori Edo Tensei


 Topic: Sofi's Productions: Sasori Edo Tensei
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  Posted on July 24, 2013 13:27
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I'm trying a new style of characters look, so please tell me how do it looks like. I'd like to ask you :
~ please rate and/or cnc
~ tell me if grammar mistakes
~ tell me if it is UP/OP
~ suggest how to balance him
~ tell me if you don't understand something


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~ Credits to radarobert for the amazing pitcures.
~ Credits to narutopedia for the character intro.
~ Credits to Kono that haven't even done something for it.

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  Posted on July 24, 2013 13:30
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There were not really a lot of grammar mistakes, but a few. Next time, try to express your English better! -- 8 / 10.
ET Sasori is OP -- he deals alot of damage, he should be able to reduce his team mates damage! -- 9 / 10.
To balance him, you'll need to work on classing, everything else is fine.. Take a look at the games ETS, chances are.. You'll get better!
Overall Character Rate:
9.5 / 10, Almost there! Obito Approves.
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  Posted on July 24, 2013 13:31
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good character sofi 10/10
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  Posted on July 24, 2013 13:31
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sasori catches an enemy with charkra charkra but preety disent character
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  Posted on July 24, 2013 13:32
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someone tell me what passive skills are
  Posted on July 24, 2013 13:34
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*Ninja-Boy* wrote:
sasori catches an enemy with charkra charkra but preety disent character
Fixed.
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  Posted on July 24, 2013 13:34
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Pretty Good ET Sasori
Good Pics,skills
Well balanced
So 9.5/10:amused
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  Posted on July 24, 2013 13:36
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7
its ok
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  Posted on July 24, 2013 13:39
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#9
Almost perfect as you.
9/10,i think defense should be 2 or more than 2 technique when he is attacked.
Good job. :3
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  Posted on July 24, 2013 13:41
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Seems little weak to me :oh
7/10 for effort
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  Posted on July 24, 2013 13:44
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-ObitoSensai14- wrote:
There were not really a lot of grammar mistakes, but a few. Next time, try to express your English better! -- 8 / 10.
ET Sasori is OP -- he deals alot of damage, he should be able to reduce his team mates damage! -- 9 / 10.
To balance him, you'll need to work on classing, everything else is fine.. Take a look at the games ETS, chances are.. You'll get better!
Overall Character Rate:
9.5 / 10, Almost there! Obito Approves.

I appreciate the comment and the rate.
Indeed, he actually helps more his teammates, in the anime but in the pics that I choosed, he attacks more.

yhyhyhy wrote:
good character sofi 10/10

Thank you.
Futon-Rasengan wrote:
Pretty Good ET Sasori
Good Pics,skills
Well balanced
So 9.5/10:amused
Thank you for leaving a comment.
konohafenix wrote:
Almost perfect as you.
9/10,i think defense should be 2 or more than 2 technique when he is attacked.
Good job. :3

umm, that's what i meant, but I guess I wrote it hard to understand.
Thanks for posting.
Arc_Slayer wrote:
Seems little weak to me :oh
7/10 for effort

Check my next character. He'll be more stronger, if you like op ones.
SasukeChidori93 wrote:
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its ok

I would appreciate a reason for that rate, but still, thank you for leaving a rate.
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  Posted on July 24, 2013 13:45
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8.
  Posted on July 24, 2013 13:46
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LeoM10 wrote:
8.

Thank you for rating.
Could you explain your rate please? o:
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  Posted on July 24, 2013 13:48
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9/10
~and what do you mena by new style?
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  Posted on July 24, 2013 13:50
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-Vinny- wrote:
9/10
~and what do you mena by new style?

Of template and colors.

Thank you for the rate ;3
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