Four Tailed Naruto


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  Posted on July 9, 2013 15:04
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~New Character~
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~ Credit myself for pics
~ Rates under 7 will be ignored if not explained
~ Credits for Sorina-Hokage for screenshots.

Yes I know this resembles the vizards in s-a i wanted him to have the same design as they do with their passive activation.



  Posted on July 9, 2013 15:10
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nice 8
  Posted on July 9, 2013 15:13
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Grammar: 9/10.
Grammar is good but not the best. Could still be improved though.

Pictures: 10/10.
Pictures are very good. They are perfect.

Skills: 8/10.
The skills are a bit OP although he's original.
- 1st skill: It should at least cost 1 random chakra. And I don't think the classes is Chakra, it should be Physical.
- 2nd skill: I don't understand what did you mean by, "Bijuu Dama will have 50% more chance to hit the enemy." Does it mean it can hit 50% chance when the enemy is invulnerable?
- 3rd skill: The cooldown should be 2 turns.

Overall: 9.5/10.
You just need to answer my question on the 2nd skill. But, it's a nice character overall. Good job and keep it up.
  Posted on July 9, 2013 15:13
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8/10
  Posted on July 9, 2013 15:14
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So damn weak, my god. 3 nin to deal 55 damage.

Ground smash needs to be way stronger, it should cost something and either deal AoE or somehow interact with Bijuu Dama. Bijuu Prep should cost one random or nothing, and be similar.
  Posted on July 9, 2013 15:17
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itsDes wrote:
So damn weak, my god. 3 nin to deal 55 damage.

Ground smash needs to be way stronger, it should cost something and either deal AoE or somehow interact with Bijuu Dama. Bijuu Prep should cost one random or nothing, and be similar.
did you even read the effects of the skills. obviously not if your calling him weak then you must :weird. and mikevil you know how in-game when you have a offensive skill that targets a random person but you can still select an enemy you want to put it on. thats what i mean it could have a better chance to target that enemy even though its a random.
  Posted on July 9, 2013 16:06
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Gaara can instakill someone for 3 nin and a random. kyuubi can deal 55 damage and cap your skills at 25.
  Posted on July 9, 2013 17:46
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itsDes wrote:
Gaara can instakill someone for 3 nin and a random. kyuubi can deal 55 damage and cap your skills at 25.
why are you comparing my character to the in-game.
  Posted on July 11, 2013 01:10
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Nice , 8/10 .


Avy and gif by Chio99
Player Card by Metal
  Posted on July 12, 2013 01:45
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10/10
  Posted on July 12, 2013 01:47
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7/10 .
  Posted on July 12, 2013 01:50
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really nice and active 9/10
  Posted on July 14, 2013 17:00
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It's good, but his 4th skill is impossible to use.. It requires 4 skills to be used, but he only has 3 other skills to use. Also, action skills can't be cancelled anyway, so that part of the second skill was unnecessary, guess it doesn't really matter though. Other than the first thing mentioned, I give it a 9

  Posted on July 14, 2013 18:19
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thx guys for rates
  Posted on July 14, 2013 20:17
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itsDes wrote:
So damn weak, my god. 3 nin to deal 55 damage.

Ground smash needs to be way stronger, it should cost something and either deal AoE or somehow interact with Bijuu Dama. Bijuu Prep should cost one random or nothing, and be similar.
i agree with this
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