Part One: Introductions


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  Posted on July 9, 2013 12:06
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Prologue

"Snake, Ram, Monkey, Boar, Horse, Tiger" he muttered, taking a huge breath in.
"Fire style: Fireball jutsu"
A stream of fire flew from his mouth, forming into a giant ball of fire.
"Wow, you're getting better I see."
He turned surprised to see a girl.
"Kushina, what are you doing here!?"
Kushina was a young beautiful girl, she had a cute smile and long pinkish red hair, he eyes where a light shade of blue.
" I just wanted to watch you practice itachi."
Itachi looked at her strangely.
"So where is your brother?, arnt you two usually together considering you're twins?"
"I'm not always with my brother you know." She replied
Itachi nodded then looked back towards the water where his fireball hit.
"we get a Jonin today, that should be interesting" Itachi said.
"Yeah, I wonder who they'll be?"
"Maybe another useless Jonin that'll die just like the last one" Itachi replied
Kushina grabbed Itachi's arm, spinning him around. She looked into his dark eyes.
"He was the best sensei we ever had"
She slapped him, he turned staring back at her.
"sorry" he muttered, with a smirk on his face
She took her hand in his and smiled.
"Itachi, you're beautiful, And smart and why am I attracted to you?"
Kushina leaned in to kiss him, his lips were quite soft but they were extremely dry.
There was a sudden cough followed by a familiar voice.
"huh, am I interrupting something?"
They both looked up appearing at a young blonde boy
"Minato!, and what do you want?" Said Kushina in an unpleasant tone.
"Well only check on my little sister, and to make sure Uchiha is being a gentleman"
She looked at Minato angrily.
"leave us alone unless you have actual business"
Minato laughed, then cracked a large smile.
"quite funny seeing as I do actually, we're to meet our team captain now!"
Itachi replied, "I thought it was later this afternoon?"
"its been changed, now come on love birds"
They made their way towards the training ground that was the appointed designation where they would meet their new sensei.
The tension between Itachi and Minato had never changed since the first day they met, as they both walked along, both taking glances at one another.
Kushina walking in front looked behind to check on them,
"stop it both of you!, if one of you starts a fight while we meet our new captain, well I'll beat you both!, got it!?"
Both Itachi and Minato looked at her.
"Understood" Itachi said
"Got it" Replied Minato
As they passed the training gate and walked across the grass, someone was standing in the middle of the field.
"Must be him" muttered Minato as he took off onto a run
"HEY!, ARE YOU OUR NEW SENSEI?
"Minato! Stop yelling idiot!" called Kushina
Their Sensei seemed to be young, in his early twenties, he wore the normal flat jacket that Chunin and Jonin ranked ninja wear, he had brown hair, and dark green eyes. His hair is combed down. his forehead protector was sown into the beanie he wore bandanna along with the standard Konoha shinobi outfit which goes all the way up to his chin, that goes under the flat jacket.
"You're all here" he smiled.
" From this point forward I will be your full time Sensei, there won't be anymore changes, So lets start with introductions shall we?"
"I want your name, something about yourself and why you decided to go on the path of a ninja,I guessI'll go first, My name is Matsuda Nadeshiko, I quite like rexaling, my goal is to teach future generations of ninja"
He looked at Minato.
"now you"
"uh.. well my name is Minato Uzumaki, I'm the twin of Kushina but im older, and my goals?, I wanted become strong like my father."
"ok very nice now the girl of the group."
Kushina smiled.
"Kushina Uzumaki" she said bowing
"though Minato is older im smarter"
"hey" replied Minato
She continued " my dream is to become Hokage life my father or to be the best medical ninja like my mother."
"good, now you" Matsuda said pointing to Itachi.
"I'm Itachi Uchiha, my father is the Hokage and thats why along with other reasons I hate him."
Minato and Kushina both looked at him
"continue" said Matsuda
Itachi looked up to Matsuda. "I became a ninja because of reasons i wont say"
"Right, well thats interesting"
"For reasons you won't?, come on Uchiha, tell us!" smirked Minato
Itachi turned to Minato
"just shut up, its none of your business!"
"aww poor uchiha has daddy issues" laughed Minato
"Stop it both of you" demanded Kushina
"hell no" replied Minato
anger crossed Itachi's face
"SHUT UP! OR I'LL.. kill you"
"Hey now guys no need to fight" said Matsuda
Itachi looked even angrier.
"Now guys calm down, because tomorrow I'll be putting you through a test"
"Sensei we've already done the bell test"
The three Genin looked up towards Matsuda, he smiled.
" This one is much tougher, now you better get well rested for tomorrow"
As they left the training ground, without a word Itachi walked off.
"you really had to go say that didnt you?"
He stopped, "well sorry for being me sis, but let's go, I have raiman to attend to.
She looked at her brother and shook her head as they continued to walk.
  Posted on July 9, 2013 12:19
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Slight grammar and spelling issues. It kinda escalated quickly from slapping him to kissing which was a bit... Overall nice read thanks.
  Posted on July 9, 2013 12:23
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hemant wrote:
Slight grammar and spelling issues. It kinda escalated quickly from slapping him to kissing which was a bit... Overall nice read thanks.

Thanks, guess I do kind of well considering I used my mobile
  Posted on July 9, 2013 12:32
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I AINT READING ALL THAT SHIT
  Posted on July 9, 2013 12:37
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lil grammer mistakes
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  Posted on July 9, 2013 12:45
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Like they've said, small grammar. It did escalate quickly, but well written.
  Posted on July 9, 2013 12:46
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hemant wrote:
Slight grammar and spelling issues. It kinda escalated quickly from slapping him to kissing which was a bit... Overall nice read thanks.
  Posted on July 9, 2013 12:48
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Thanks, if I was on my actual computer doing it, I would re read it and edit it.
  Posted on July 9, 2013 13:04
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It's pretty nice other than the grammar and spelling mistake. But I think you 'rushed' this a bit. Well, good job though. Keep it up, I would like to see more of this in the future.

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