Cursed seal sasuke


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  Posted on July 4, 2013 14:09
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All images from delax images shop couldnt find decent pic for invul lol Rate and cnc 2v0oprq.png
  Posted on July 4, 2013 14:12
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Many grammar errors
Chidori UP
Hand seals " can counter " , how do hand seals counter?
5.5/10


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  Posted on July 4, 2013 14:13
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SHERDDER wrote:
Many grammar errors
Chidori UP
Hand seals " can counter " , how do hand seals counter?
5.5/10


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i sayed couldnt find some pics i needed
  Posted on July 4, 2013 14:13
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The invulnerable skill is not of CSS :oh

5/10

Chidori is up make it piercing
And CSS don't need any counters
Cuz he didnot counter any in fight vs kyuubi
So replace it with katon
Nor he activates sharingan after CSS form (no)
He changed into CSS while he was in sharingan
I will change my rate
No flow and originality

4/10.
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  Posted on July 4, 2013 14:14
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Invulnerability skill isn't of Cursed Seal Sasuke.

Nice char, 8/10;

  Posted on July 4, 2013 14:15
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byakuya-361 wrote:
SHERDDER wrote:
Many grammar errors
Chidori UP
Hand seals " can counter " , how do hand seals counter?
5.5/10


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i sayed couldnt find some pics i needed
You said you couldn't find decent pic for invul skill , not any other skill
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  Posted on July 4, 2013 14:16
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lol
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naruto-turl wrote:
The invulnerable skill is not of CSS :oh

5/10

Chidori is up make it piercing
And CSS don't need any counters
Cuz he didnot counter any in fight vs kyuubi
So replace it with katon
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  Posted on July 4, 2013 14:18
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6/10 :blink :blink
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  Posted on July 4, 2013 14:24
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7/10 and i think balanced! :amused
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  Posted on July 4, 2013 14:25
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Grammar: 6/10.
Characters like this should have a mission requirement. There are still so many grammar errors, and spelling mistakes. You need to fix it somehow. If you're not good at Grammar, you can use Google Translate.

Pictures: 8/10.
Pictures look too zoomed-in. The 3rd skill and the invulnerability skill is not CSS. It's the original Sasuke's. Though the quality is pretty good.

Skills: 7/10.
He is too UP and lacks creativity.
- 2nd skill: Make it 35 damage and make the cooldown 2 turns.
- 3rd skill: Too simple. Maybe make it stuns the countered enemy's Chakra skills for 1 turn?

Overall: 7/10.
Not that bad but you need to improve more.

Edit: For more information about the classes thingy, ask The Master of Classes below me. :blink
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  Posted on July 4, 2013 14:26
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Bad classes.
First skill should be Mental, Instant, Unique, Ranged*
Why?
mental ~ he don't use physical or chakra strenght to use it.
Instant ~ it's not a control or a action skill
unique ~ it's only able to be used by uchiha clan members
ranged* ~ because he actually affects the foes when he make their skills visible.

Second skill is not ranged.
It should be, Chakra, Instant, Melee, Unique
Remove the random chakra and or make it do deal 10/15 more damage.

The Third skill should be Physical, Instant, Melee*
because you don't know if the opponent will get countered or not.

I honestly like the pics that you choosed for this character :3

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5.
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