Karin Uzumaki (S)


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  Posted on July 2, 2013 16:21
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  Posted on July 2, 2013 16:32
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I feel like you're trying way too hard to make it original
The skills have really weird names
The third skill doesn't make sense as to why it would heal Karin, since the biting actually makes her weaker
Plus making it so that it stacks is overpowered.
6/10
  Posted on July 2, 2013 16:32
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DragoNaruto24 wrote:
I feel like you're trying way too hard to make it original
The skills have really weird names
The third skill doesn't make sense as to why it would heal Karin, since the biting actually makes her weaker
Plus making it so that it stacks is overpowered.
6/10
This but i would give you a 5/10



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  Posted on July 2, 2013 16:34
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i dont like the feels chakra pic nor tht chakra transfer biting only heals 15 but ill give it an 8 because its not bad
  Posted on July 2, 2013 16:38
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5/10 .
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DragoNaruto24 wrote:
I feel like you're trying way too hard to make it original
The skills have really weird names
The third skill doesn't make sense as to why it would heal Karin, since the biting actually makes her weaker
Plus making it so that it stacks is overpowered.
6/10

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  Posted on July 2, 2013 17:04
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DragoNaruto24 wrote:
I feel like you're trying way too hard to make it original
The skills have really weird names
The third skill doesn't make sense as to why it would heal Karin, since the biting actually makes her weaker
Plus making it so that it stacks is overpowered.
6/10
THis.
  Posted on July 2, 2013 17:10
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DragoNaruto24 wrote:
I feel like you're trying way too hard to make it original
The skills have really weird names
The third skill doesn't make sense as to why it would heal Karin, since the biting actually makes her weaker
Plus making it so that it stacks is overpowered.
6/10
This but 5.5



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