~Kakuzu (S)~


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  Posted on June 15, 2013 16:41
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  Posted on June 15, 2013 16:43
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You can make characters now :amazed

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Did be cool if the suprised attack had 0 cd :amazed
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  Posted on June 15, 2013 16:43
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lordbiel15 wrote:
You can make characters now :amazed

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Did be cool if the suprised attack had 0 cd :amazed
He's OP enough.
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  Posted on June 15, 2013 16:45
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6 op op op :amused
  Posted on June 15, 2013 16:46
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Good Char...Alternates Are Op
8.7/10
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  Posted on June 15, 2013 16:47
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Surprise Attack
- Reduce their offensive skills by 50% for how long?
- What's the '*' for?

Fire Release: Intelligent Hard Work
- Overpowered, make it 1 Blood 1 Random or reduce damage to 10 + 10.

Lightning Release: False Darkness
- Change Genjutsu to Ninjutsu.

Pressure Damage
- One too many s'.
- Missed 'Work' off the end of the sentence.

Fire-Wind Dual Strike
- Change Genjutsu to Ninjutsu.

7/10.
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  Posted on June 15, 2013 16:47
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Fire Release is overpowered just a bit
You should put how long Surprise Attack lasts for
You should also put how long Lightning Release lasts for, cause it just says if they use a skill.
He also uses every type of chakra, so it would be hard to have him on an actual team
maybe make lightning release and fire-wind use ninjutsu instead of genjutsu?
Also Surprise Attack should cost an additional random cause it's overpowered as it is right now
5/10
  Posted on June 15, 2013 16:50
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koskillz wrote:
Surprise Attack
- Reduce their offensive skills by 50% for how long?
- What's the '*' for?

Fire Release: Intelligent Hard Work
- Overpowered, make it 1 Blood 1 Random or reduce damage to 10 + 10.

Lightning Release: False Darkness
- Change Genjutsu to Ninjutsu.

Pressure Damage
- One too many s'.
- Missed 'Work' off the end of the sentence.

Fire-Wind Dual Strike
- Change Genjutsu to Ninjutsu.

7/10.
1. 1 turn and the * symbolizes it can't reduce affliction.
2. Yeah i figured so.
3/5. I don't want him to be all Blood/Nin. I'd like him to have all the chakra's in his skill set so he has a varierty.
4. I just noticed that also.

Gonna fix some things before finalizing.
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  Posted on June 15, 2013 16:51
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Fire-Wind strike should deal 5 or 10 less affliction damage.
Why do it cost a genjutsu chakra? o:
It's more like ninjutsu. A fire skill should be ninjutsu and a wind skill can be taijutsu, genjutsu or ninjutsu aswell.
If you want to balance the character by adding that cost it's your decision :p
9/10.
Is still a good character c:
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  Posted on June 15, 2013 16:54
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Akatsuki_Sofia wrote:
Fire-Wind strike should deal 5 or 10 less affliction damage.
Why do it cost a genjutsu chakra? o:
It's more like ninjutsu. A fire skill should be ninjutsu and a wind skill can be taijutsu, genjutsu or ninjutsu aswell.
If you want to balance the character by adding that cost it's your decision :p
9/10.
Is still a good character c:
The white chakra doesn't always symbolize genjutsu.
Ex. Kakuzu's Lightning mask in NA cost a white. Itachi (S)'s Totsuka Sword cost a white.
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  Posted on June 15, 2013 16:58
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spike7011 wrote:
Akatsuki_Sofia wrote:
Fire-Wind strike should deal 5 or 10 less affliction damage.
Why do it cost a genjutsu chakra? o:
It's more like ninjutsu. A fire skill should be ninjutsu and a wind skill can be taijutsu, genjutsu or ninjutsu aswell.
If you want to balance the character by adding that cost it's your decision :p
9/10.
Is still a good character c:
The white chakra doesn't always symbolize genjutsu.
Ex. Kakuzu's Lightning mask in NA cost a white. Itachi (S)'s Totsuka Sword cost a white.
The costs of them are made to balance the characters.
They are adding wrong classes and chakras to balance them.
Example: Chouji's replacement technique is 'Physical, Intant' while it should be 'chakra, Instant'.
Example: Yondaime Hokage's rasengan is a genjutsu and a taijutsu chakra while he uses ninjutsu to create a rasengan.
When you say Rasengan you are thinking of chakra, then ninjutsu.
The rasengan should cost 2 ninjutsu chakras or 1 ninjutsu and 1 taijutsu chakra.
The wrong classes and costs are made to balance the characters.
Ninjutsu: ~ a skill that uses and requires the usage of chakra.

Taijutsu: ~ physical strength

Genjutsu: ~ a mental skill, a illusion that looks like a real attack, skill but don't touches the body of the opponent. Only his mind.

Bloodline: ~ a signature skill. Like sharingan or something that requires blood to be actives, something that hurts or a keke genkai.
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  Posted on June 15, 2013 17:16
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9/10 good characeter. :amused