Gaara (S) || by saske1112


 Topic: Gaara (S) || by saske1112
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  Posted on May 28, 2013 16:15
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Hi! I decided to prepare characters from here
First is Gaara (Kazekage rescue arc)
This is my first char
Please rate and CnC
Sorry for grammar mistakes

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  Posted on May 28, 2013 16:18
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There is alot of grammer mistakes 6/10
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  Posted on May 28, 2013 16:22
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A llot of grammar mistakes, not very unique but still ok don't worry
6///10
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  Posted on May 28, 2013 16:35
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6/10 grammer mistakes
  Posted on May 28, 2013 16:51
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5/10 .
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  Posted on May 28, 2013 16:52
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#6
its good .. though a little too much chakra usage..
7/10
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  Posted on May 28, 2013 17:31
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6/10 e.e
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  Posted on May 28, 2013 17:33
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9 nice pics :cool :cool :cool
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  Posted on May 28, 2013 19:34
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at first time 7/10 :cheesy
  Posted on May 29, 2013 02:25
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#10
You could work on grammar a little, lot of chakra being used, but about a 7 for a first time character.
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  Posted on June 13, 2013 22:18
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7
  Posted on September 30, 2013 02:44
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#12
very good it's wayyyy better than the other gaiS shinobi arc i saw yesterday
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  Posted on September 30, 2013 22:01
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Nice character 8/10
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  Posted on September 30, 2013 22:29
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good, 8. :cool
  Posted on November 19, 2013 21:00
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7
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