Gaara (S) || by saske1112


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  Posted on May 28, 2013 16:15
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#1
Hi! I decided to prepare characters from here
First is Gaara (Kazekage rescue arc)
This is my first char
Please rate and CnC
Sorry for grammar mistakes



  Posted on May 28, 2013 16:18
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There is alot of grammer mistakes 6/10

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  Posted on May 28, 2013 16:22
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A llot of grammar mistakes, not very unique but still ok don't worry
6///10
  Posted on May 28, 2013 16:35
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6/10 grammer mistakes
  Posted on May 28, 2013 16:51
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5/10 .
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  Posted on May 28, 2013 16:52
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#6
its good .. though a little too much chakra usage..
7/10
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  Posted on May 28, 2013 17:31
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6/10 e.e
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  Posted on May 28, 2013 17:33
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9 nice pics
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  Posted on May 28, 2013 19:34
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at first time 7/10
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  Posted on May 29, 2013 02:25
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#10
You could work on grammar a little, lot of chakra being used, but about a 7 for a first time character.
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  Posted on June 13, 2013 22:18
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7
  Posted on September 30, 2013 02:44
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very good it's wayyyy better than the other gaiS shinobi arc i saw yesterday

  Posted on September 30, 2013 22:01
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#13
Nice character 8/10
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  Posted on September 30, 2013 22:29
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good, 8.
  Posted on November 19, 2013 21:00
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