Edo Tensei Madara Uchiha (S) || By Rasengan_89


 Topic: Edo Tensei Madara Uchiha (S) || By Rasengan_89
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  Posted on May 14, 2013 15:34
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Hello there.
Comments like "Bad skills" "6.1/10" "wtf lol" will be ignored.
RATE AND COMMENT PLEASE, EXPLAIN RATE UNDER 8.5

And after Hashirama and Tobirama, here it is His Majesty Epicness (lolwut?) Madara.


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Here you are some notes before you comment:
- About the skills
Just define OP and UP and how should I change it.
- About the grammar
If you find any mistake, report it so I can fix that. I am Italian, you woul help me in improving my English
- About the CnC
I want to read them. Without them I cant improve the character and myself

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- Rasengan_89 (me) for editing the pictures and making the characters.


Thanks to everyone who comments :)

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  Posted on May 14, 2013 15:52
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Already seen this one
9.5/10 :cool
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  Posted on May 14, 2013 16:18
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10/10 good job
  Posted on May 14, 2013 16:19
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2 so inaccurate that it makes me sick.:suspicious
  Posted on May 14, 2013 16:43
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janisnaruto wrote:
2 so inaccurate that it makes me sick.:suspicious

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  Posted on May 14, 2013 16:56
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8.10 all chackras Bro ? Lol , our good job ' :blink :blink
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  Posted on May 14, 2013 17:07
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Nice. Even tho I've seen it Ill comment. :cheesy
The flow is okay
Original [yes]
Powerful [HELL YEAH!!] - But not OP, which is important.
He is very nicely done, and I like it. It suits the character. :smile
8.5/10
Cuz this kind of flow was already on your Bijuu Mode Naruto.
  Posted on May 14, 2013 17:09
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Hokage_753 wrote:
Nice. Even tho I've seen it Ill comment. :cheesy
The flow is okay
Original [yes]
Powerful [HELL YEAH!!] - But not OP, which is important.
He is very nicely done, and I like it. It suits the character. :smile
8.5/10
Cuz this kind of flow was already on your Bijuu Mode Naruto.

In Bijuu Naruto the specific was changed to random, in this one nope.
Plus, in Bijuu Mode once you use the first skill you can keep on using ONLY randoms, while here it doesnt happen, but thanks anyway :laugh
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  Posted on May 14, 2013 17:40
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9/10 nice character :amused
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  Posted on May 14, 2013 17:48
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Cooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooool
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  Posted on May 14, 2013 18:02
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1st skill: no need for the *, and it is not actually Unique, it is just a elemental Dragon blast like Water Dragon which as you've seen many can use it. It has the trend to become OP with its "Less chakra" effect but mehh it's ok

2nd skill: as I can understand you use it one foes and if the next turn you use a skill on you opponents then it drains, but it also works if 1st skill is active on one opponent right? then it's cool :cool
and you should add a Action* on its "Heaven Concealed costs 1 less bloodline for 2 turns." because it is counted as 2nd skill's effect and it actualyl lasts for 2 turns. And i'd remove 1 CD for better balance even if Heaven Concealed resets the CDs, still it would be better with 1 less CD.

3rd skill: Well I usually hate the kind of too many chakras skills but this one is cool, its balancing itself effect which I love when seeing it in a skill. But it has a little "something not good" in it, as I can see mostly it is based on luck, even though the other skills are made so it can be used with more ease those effects actually decrease the ammount of chances you have for it to deal some damage. And I have once question about it, if you have let's say the 4 chakras to use it + 1 nin 1 tai and you have Naruto (S) in your team, if you first use his Oodama Rasengan, will Heaven Concealed's damage still decrease by 30 or not?

4th skill: Well this one is ok if it counters 1 skill, but if it counters all skills used on him it's OP because dealing 15 piercing damage to each foe which deals him, well I think its effect is the first one I said so it is ok e,e.


Well the character is a good work, but I don't like the pics at all sorry xD I just hate th Gradient Overlay thing.
Original for sure (except the 4th skill but let's pass over it xD).
Kinda expensive in chakra usage but it's balanced so it's ok.
In description in place of "Senju's" it should be "Hashirama's" because you're talking about his friend's DNA, Senju's is not wrong either but Hashirama's is better xD

a rate, well I hate to give rates because they're good for nothing but well.. let's say a 8/10



  Posted on May 14, 2013 18:03
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  Posted on May 14, 2013 18:28
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Thanks to all.

@Rada: There's mroe than a simple "gradint overaly" thingy on the pics xD But its tastes, so I wont discuss about it.
About the 3rd skill: The cost is influenced by the usage of his other skills.
It's not an optional.
1st skill is unique because Narutopedia says that only he used it. So I gave him that unicity.

Thanks for passing though :D
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  Posted on May 14, 2013 21:00
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Rasengan_89 wrote:
Thanks to all.

@Rada: There's mroe than a simple "gradint overaly" thingy on the pics xD But its tastes, so I wont discuss about it.
About the 3rd skill: The cost is influenced by the usage of his other skills.
It's not an optional.
1st skill is unique because Narutopedia says that only he used it. So I gave him that unicity.

Thanks for passing though :D

no problem, and I understood the 3rd skill e,e don't worry
well as I remember aabout 1st skill, Sasuke also used Dragon Flame jutsu in his fight with Itachi and also in Naruto versus Orochimaru Grass Genin only that there it didn't have this form
and about the pics, well that's what I can see that you did most on them xD I can't really see every single effect you added, I'm not a real expert xD
  Posted on May 15, 2013 04:22
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K pal, I'm here O/

1st skill: is cool, no change needed
2nd skill:, I think you should specify how it works, from what I got, it targets for 1 turn and applies the effect in the next turn on those allies who were targeted. But I'm still not sure...
3rd: I say and AoE effect is needed U_U. Just fanboying on Madara here, don't mind me.
4th: Cool too I guess.

Overall is a Ok character, not bad at all, but not as epic as it should be (fanboying again).

and btw, those colors.... Rainbow Madara ftw, cuz u know, "All he needs is love, love and love only" \O/ :cool
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