Yondaime Raikage (S)


 Topic: Yondaime Raikage (S)
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Poll: is it cool?
35 vote(s) since May 4, 2013 19:03
yeah (25) (71%)
not yet (5) (14%)
Noooo (5) (14%)
  Posted on May 4, 2013 19:03
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#1
rate and comment; pics for lewis1999 (thanks); its mine and Almenara

rates below 7 should be explain or will be ignored ; sorry bad english

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  Posted on May 4, 2013 19:04
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  Posted on May 4, 2013 19:05
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#3
very cool, very cool indeed. I loved the Raikage :nuts
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  Posted on May 4, 2013 19:06
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8/10 im too lazy to write cnc but its cool
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  Posted on May 4, 2013 19:13
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#5
stop using that custom character creator software and just use PS or Gimp, text in last skill is cut off because of it.
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  Posted on May 4, 2013 19:34
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Bad grammer decent pics a little OP in my opinion 7/10

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  Posted on May 4, 2013 19:36
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#7
A little too OP
No originality
I see a little flow there
7/10
  Posted on May 4, 2013 19:44
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#8
The secound skill needs a boost and the third needs a nerf.
Secound should ignore invulnerability or it should make the foe to deal 5 less damage and the skill should deal 5 more damage during the first skill but should have 1 more random chakra during that skill.
The third skill should deal 30 piercing damage to one foe and 20 to the others and have 2 cooldowns. It should have the cooldown increased and the costs descreased during the first skill and it should deal 5 more damage. Like this they can flow.
Or the first skill can deal 15 piercing damage for 1 random, the third 25 piercing damage to one foe and 15 to the others and for every 20 DD on Raikage, the skills will deal 5 more damage.

Thats what I think.
The character may get a 8,25
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  Posted on May 4, 2013 20:02
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Bakegamon wrote:
very cool, very cool indeed. I loved the Raikage :nuts

thanks :teeth
  Posted on May 4, 2013 20:04
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i will made some changes, more rates plz :amused
  Posted on May 4, 2013 20:05
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9 / 10

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  Posted on May 4, 2013 20:08
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itachixtsukuyomi wrote:
stop using that custom character creator software and just use PS or Gimp, text in last skill is cut off because of it.

I already made the changes :confused , thanks
  Posted on May 4, 2013 20:09
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Akatsuki_Sofia wrote:
The secound skill needs a boost and the third needs a nerf.
Secound should ignore invulnerability or it should make the foe to deal 5 less damage and the skill should deal 5 more damage during the first skill but should have 1 more random chakra during that skill.
The third skill should deal 30 piercing damage to one foe and 20 to the others and have 2 cooldowns. It should have the cooldown increased and the costs descreased during the first skill and it should deal 5 more damage. Like this they can flow.
Or the first skill can deal 15 piercing damage for 1 random, the third 25 piercing damage to one foe and 15 to the others and for every 20 DD on Raikage, the skills will deal 5 more damage.

Thats what I think.
The character may get a 8,25

thanks for the tips :cool
  Posted on May 4, 2013 20:59
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8.5/10 . Nice :teeth








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  Posted on May 4, 2013 21:56
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8/10 ... nice :) :amused
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