Itachi Uchiha


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  Posted on April 14, 2013 19:40
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  Posted on April 14, 2013 19:45
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6/10
Too much skills
Not much original
No flow around.
Pics and balance are okay.
6 is really the highest i can give on him.
  Posted on April 14, 2013 19:47
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Hokage_753 wrote:
6/10
Too much skills
Not much original
No flow around.
Pics and balance are okay.
6 is really the highest i can give on him.
How can i improve?
  Posted on April 14, 2013 19:49
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7/10 .
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  Posted on April 14, 2013 20:02
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#5
take out high speed counter attack
Katon: Goukakyou should deal 20 piercing for balancing issues.
make Fake clone cost a random w/ a cooldown of 3
have susanoo acivation do 30DD w/ just a blood
everthing else the same.

8/10
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  Posted on April 14, 2013 20:03
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itachikiller_023 wrote:
take out high speed counter attack
Katon: Goukakyou should deal 20 piercing for balancing issues.
make Fake clone cost a random w/ a cooldown of 3
have susanoo acivation do 30DD w/ just a blood
everthing else the same.

8/10
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  Posted on April 14, 2013 20:11
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Too many skills, all are Op anyways. bad pics, grammar sucks.

3/10

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  Posted on April 14, 2013 20:17
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5/10
bad pics
make SA deal 10 afflication dmg to all enemies.
make FC counter and for each char that attacks him stun them
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  Posted on April 14, 2013 20:25
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9/10 :amused :amused
  Posted on April 14, 2013 20:43
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9/10 :amused :amused
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  Posted on April 15, 2013 15:13
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  Posted on April 15, 2013 16:38
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Hmm, intresting.

The first skill is fairly simple and somehow balanced. I'd recommend making it affliction damage instead though.
Second skill is very standard, but again balanced. The only thing I'd recommend for the general flow is making that skill change the others. I mean, if you activate SA, the skills will become their alternatives until the DD is destroyed. It'd make it more intresting.
Third skill is rather boring and a touch underpowered. I'd recommend making it deal minor damage to counter enemies or other similar effects (they will deal 5 less damage for 3 turns, for example). Also, what is HSCA?
First Alt is again standard but it works. Having two counters in one same character seems a bit pointless. Maybe you can make it more intresting to difference it from the third skill.
Second Alt is a bit overpowered. I'd recommend making it remove one genjutsu chakra or ninjutsu. Other than that, I like it.
Third Alt is unoriginal but good in general standars. Though it is not very clear. Does it stack? the effect with K:G stacks? can it be used on a different foe?

The flow is there, but a bit lacky. I'd recommend making the skills interact with each other a bit more.
Not very original as a whole, but it seems like a strong character. Is good, the pics look well and it is mostly well balanced.

7.5/10

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  Posted on April 15, 2013 16:43
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The facepic is awful, you should work on those.

The first skill is fine, I guess. I don't like the idea of a Katon stunning, but it's whatever.

You should make the first alt have a two turn cooldown since, y'know, counters are balanced when there's a decent time you have to wait to use them again.

Head Cutter should just remove two random chakra, rather than a genjutsu or ninjutsu. That doesn't make too much sense to me.

Amaterasu's fine, it's probably one of the few unique[ish] skills.

6 / 10. You should have someone proofread your characters for grammar errors before you post, since you don't have a full understanding of English.
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  Posted on April 16, 2013 02:55
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Lordpatt wrote:
Hmm, intresting.

The first skill is fairly simple and somehow balanced. I'd recommend making it affliction damage instead though.
Second skill is very standard, but again balanced. The only thing I'd recommend for the general flow is making that skill change the others. I mean, if you activate SA, the skills will become their alternatives until the DD is destroyed. It'd make it more intresting.
Third skill is rather boring and a touch underpowered. I'd recommend making it deal minor damage to counter enemies or other similar effects (they will deal 5 less damage for 3 turns, for example). Also, what is HSCA?
First Alt is again standard but it works. Having two counters in one same character seems a bit pointless. Maybe you can make it more intresting to difference it from the third skill.
Second Alt is a bit overpowered. I'd recommend making it remove one genjutsu chakra or ninjutsu. Other than that, I like it.
Third Alt is unoriginal but good in general standars. Though it is not very clear. Does it stack? the effect with K:G stacks? can it be used on a different foe?

The flow is there, but a bit lacky. I'd recommend making the skills interact with each other a bit more.
Not very original as a whole, but it seems like a strong character. Is good, the pics look well and it is mostly well balanced.

7.5/10

Good job!
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  Posted on April 20, 2013 08:53
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not bad 8/10:amazed pics are not good.
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