Monkey D. Luffy by:tomasakatsuki


 Topic: Monkey D. Luffy by:tomasakatsuki
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15 vote(s) since March 29, 2013 22:04
Yes! (7) (47%)
no (3) (20%)
its +/- (3) (20%)
No but Luffy rocks (2) (13%)
  Posted on March 29, 2013 22:04
tomasakatsuki
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#1
First One Piece char i dont know classes of OP and energy but here it is:
Pics by:ithreddevil and EdgeIsBack hope you like ^^

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  Posted on March 29, 2013 22:49
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#2
nice one 9/10 :cheesy
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  Posted on March 29, 2013 22:50
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#3
Miauw26 wrote:
nice one 9/10 :cheesy
Thanks and finally someone comments!
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  Posted on March 31, 2013 09:33
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#4
8/10 Pretty good
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  Posted on March 31, 2013 19:48
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rd_sasuke wrote:
8/10 Pretty good

thanks
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  Posted on April 1, 2013 09:27
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#6
It's good, but it's OP.

Improvements:

Second move: 15 damage instead of 25. Also get rid of the stuns on the physical and ranged.
Third Move: Make the cool down be like 3 - 5 rounds long. 1 is too short for such a powerful move.
Fifth move: 35 damage. Cooldown is 2 rounds long atleast.

Other than that it's fine! 7/10
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  Posted on April 4, 2013 20:04
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#7
Naruto-7thHokage wrote:
It's good, but it's OP.

Improvements:

Second move: 15 damage instead of 25. Also get rid of the stuns on the physical and ranged.
Third Move: Make the cool down be like 3 - 5 rounds long. 1 is too short for such a powerful move.
Fifth move: 35 damage. Cooldown is 2 rounds long atleast.

Other than that it's fine! 7/10

thanks i will remember
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  Posted on April 5, 2013 21:47
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8.7/10
  Posted on April 14, 2013 02:01
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#9
Whoa dam hes op but indeed luffy himself is op

Few grammar mistakes overall i lovem 9.9/10
  Posted on April 19, 2013 14:11
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#10
1st skill OP reduce the damage to 20
3rd skill OP make him invulnerable against one type of skills
5th skill, wait how the hell do you use it? on 3rd skill you said that 5th skill can now be used when it should be "this skill turns into *5th skill* for the next turn or forever idk
5th skill OP, 45 damage + full stun? it seems that you don't even know when one skill is too OP

no originality, no real flow, no concept, OP, MQ pics, no classes (I don't care that you don't know them if you start doing a char you must know at least the classes, write them wrong but you need to know them)

4/10
  Posted on April 20, 2013 22:41
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#11
Very nice character 9/10 :blink
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  Posted on April 21, 2013 17:00
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ELLOCOED13 wrote:
Very nice character 9/10 :blink

thanks :D
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  Posted on April 22, 2013 13:59
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#13
i like him, nice pic and balanced one 9.5/10
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  Posted on May 8, 2013 23:08
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#14
qofte wrote:
i like him, nice pic and balanced one 9.5/10

Thanks :D
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  Posted on May 12, 2013 21:27
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#15
9.5/10 - Nice char ' :amused :amused
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