Uzumaki Naruto KM 2.0


 Topic: Uzumaki Naruto KM 2.0
Users reading this topic: There are no members reading this topic.
  Posted on March 16, 2013 05:31
Sak8s
Rank: member

Forum Rank:
Joker

Posts: 85
Joined on:
March 12, 2013
#1
This is my first char after a loooooooooong time (1 year)
I'm forgot my password, my login and my email I'm a old member and i prefer don't tell my old name :/
Please ignore grammar errors i'm is a brazilian guy...
Pics by Me~
(Invalid img)
I use universal Creator to do This... I think the font is... LQ?
"Find Light in the Beautiful Sea, I choose to be Happy! You and I, You and I! Where Like Diamonds in the Sky!"
  Posted on March 16, 2013 05:38
pain-ryningan
Rank: member

Forum Rank:
N-A Illuminati

Posts: 3686
Joined on:
January 20, 2011
#2
fonts just suck
the hell is it bold? D:
pics are ok
i wont read or rate char like that bro i cant read D:
improve it

Challenge meh D:<
credits to Khan for signature, yeh ya twats, i am immortal legend D:<
Cheese
  Posted on March 16, 2013 05:42
Sak8s
Rank: member

Forum Rank:
Joker

Posts: 85
Joined on:
March 12, 2013
#3
pain-ryningan wrote:
fonts just suck
the hell is it bold? D:
pics are ok
i wont read or rate char like that bro i cant read D:
improve it
i know this is because of ultimate creator :/
"Find Light in the Beautiful Sea, I choose to be Happy! You and I, You and I! Where Like Diamonds in the Sky!"
  Posted on March 16, 2013 05:43
pain-ryningan
Rank: member

Forum Rank:
N-A Illuminati

Posts: 3686
Joined on:
January 20, 2011
#4
Sak8s wrote:
pain-ryningan wrote:
fonts just suck
the hell is it bold? D:
pics are ok
i wont read or rate char like that bro i cant read D:
improve it
i know this is because of ultimate creator :/
try using character creator then xD

Challenge meh D:<
credits to Khan for signature, yeh ya twats, i am immortal legend D:<
Cheese
  Posted on March 16, 2013 05:44
Hitsugaya610
Rank: member

Forum Rank:
Licker

Posts: 1496
Joined on:
December 8, 2008
#5
i think first skill is a little op. maybe gain 2 chakras instead of 3. Also on the invul. skill is it the turn he becomes invulnerable or the run after. I'm guessing bijju bomb "energy" thing is just has something to do with naruto. Other than that he pretty unique but has alot going on. 8.5/10
||My Name's Hitsu||Proud Ivy Member and Gfxer||Newest Work Below||

N-B Bros in Crime: Tyson, Pervy, Aiko, Ashu, Rohit, Aka, Kai||HItsu+Kai=BFFs||
Influences: Matbob, Ryan (Rememberz), Kai, Tyson||Novice Character Creator
  Posted on March 16, 2013 05:46
Sak8s
Rank: member

Forum Rank:
Joker

Posts: 85
Joined on:
March 12, 2013
#6
Hitsugaya610 wrote:
i think first skill is a little op. maybe gain 2 chakras instead of 3. Also on the invul. skill is it the turn he becomes invulnerable or the run after. I'm guessing bijju bomb "energy" thing is just has something to do with naruto. Other than that he pretty unique but has alot going on. 8.5/10
NO he gains 1 or 2 chakra he is'nt an ally
"Find Light in the Beautiful Sea, I choose to be Happy! You and I, You and I! Where Like Diamonds in the Sky!"
  Posted on March 16, 2013 05:49
Sak8s
Rank: member

Forum Rank:
Joker

Posts: 85
Joined on:
March 12, 2013
#7
pain-ryningan wrote:
Sak8s wrote:
pain-ryningan wrote:
fonts just suck
the hell is it bold? D:
pics are ok
i wont read or rate char like that bro i cant read D:
improve it
i know this is because of ultimate creator :/
try using character creator then xD
character creator don't works on my PC needs .NET Framework 3.5 :/
"Find Light in the Beautiful Sea, I choose to be Happy! You and I, You and I! Where Like Diamonds in the Sky!"
  Posted on March 16, 2013 05:52
Hitsugaya610
Rank: member

Forum Rank:
Licker

Posts: 1496
Joined on:
December 8, 2008
#8
Sak8s wrote:
Hitsugaya610 wrote:
i think first skill is a little op. maybe gain 2 chakras instead of 3. Also on the invul. skill is it the turn he becomes invulnerable or the run after. I'm guessing bijju bomb "energy" thing is just has something to do with naruto. Other than that he pretty unique but has alot going on. 8.5/10
NO he gains 1 or 2 chakra he is'nt an ally
The wording is really weird. You should make it say like hmmm,

"Naruto shares his chakra with his comrades. For each ally currently alive, Naruto KM 2.0 will gain an additional chakra". Something to that degree. You put to many words which made it confusing. Lol I really have no other problems with this character after you clarify the enger thing for the bijuu bomb skill, 3rd skill.
||My Name's Hitsu||Proud Ivy Member and Gfxer||Newest Work Below||

N-B Bros in Crime: Tyson, Pervy, Aiko, Ashu, Rohit, Aka, Kai||HItsu+Kai=BFFs||
Influences: Matbob, Ryan (Rememberz), Kai, Tyson||Novice Character Creator
  Posted on March 16, 2013 05:55
Neji-BlindEyes
Rank: member

Forum Rank:
Pyro's Slave

Posts: 279
Joined on:
February 12, 2010
#9
Perfect Character, but 9.5/10
Only because of the font. Which is kinda
a huge part of the characters creations. Try using
Custom Character Creator.

Other than that awesome! Freaking Awesome!

Edit: Don't be so rude when people point out your mistakes.
Just go along with it, you never even have to consider it if you don't
want to.
My Character Showcase

"Yuuki..! Good night.. Yuuki!"
  Posted on March 16, 2013 05:56
Sak8s
Rank: member

Forum Rank:
Joker

Posts: 85
Joined on:
March 12, 2013
#10
Hitsugaya610 wrote:
Sak8s wrote:
Hitsugaya610 wrote:
i think first skill is a little op. maybe gain 2 chakras instead of 3. Also on the invul. skill is it the turn he becomes invulnerable or the run after. I'm guessing bijju bomb "energy" thing is just has something to do with naruto. Other than that he pretty unique but has alot going on. 8.5/10
NO he gains 1 or 2 chakra he is'nt an ally
The wording is really weird. You should make it say like hmmm,

"Naruto shares his chakra with his comrades. For each ally currently alive, Naruto KM 2.0 will gain an additional chakra". Something to that degree. You put to many words which made it confusing. Lol I really have no other problems with this character after you clarify the enger thing for the bijuu bomb skill, 3rd skill.
WOW the third skill is easy! : naruto can gain 1 or 2 energys (One per ally) if gains 1 he deals 50 piercing damage to an enemy that cannot be reflected OR if he gains only one energy all enemys take 20 piercing damage that cannot be countered.
IF only naruto is allive the skill changes permanent into Full Protection.
"Find Light in the Beautiful Sea, I choose to be Happy! You and I, You and I! Where Like Diamonds in the Sky!"
  Posted on March 16, 2013 06:03
Sak8s
Rank: member

Forum Rank:
Joker

Posts: 85
Joined on:
March 12, 2013
#11
Neji-BlindEyes wrote:
Perfect Character, but 9.5/10
Only because of the font. Which is kinda
a huge part of the characters creations. Try using
Custom Character Creator.

Other than that awesome! Freaking Awesome!

Edit: Don't be so rude when people point out your mistakes.
Just go along with it, you never even have to consider it if you don't
want to.
Thank you man, but my PC have a slow connection i cannot download the .NET framework 3.5 :/ I hav photoshop in a other Computer i try with this in the next time :)
"Find Light in the Beautiful Sea, I choose to be Happy! You and I, You and I! Where Like Diamonds in the Sky!"
  Posted on March 16, 2013 06:40
Flamemango
Rank: member

Forum Rank:
Licker

Posts: 1383
Joined on:
November 19, 2012
#12
ummmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm
9.5
Avy by lion_sussuno
Sig credit to Lion
Someon likes himself http://prntscr.com/2jbpwa
  Posted on March 16, 2013 07:22
kyuubinaru
Rank: member

Forum Rank:
N-A Illuminati

Posts: 4814
Joined on:
November 26, 2008
#13
10/10
  Posted on March 16, 2013 07:43
jilsen-kun
Rank: member

Forum Rank:
Pyro's Slave

Posts: 368
Joined on:
November 27, 2009
#14
sucks
0
No sig
Coz fuck that shit

MACHINE GUN KELLY
WILD BOY
CALL ME STEVE-O
  Posted on March 16, 2013 08:10
loriscangini
Rank: member

Forum Rank:
Pyro's Slave

Posts: 223
Joined on:
February 12, 2010
#15
Sak8s wrote:
pain-ryningan wrote:
fonts just suck
the hell is it bold? D:
pics are ok
i wont read or rate char like that bro i cant read D:
improve it
i know this is because of ultimate creator :/

I'm the author of ultimate creator, I didn't notice that there are problems with the text! I'll find a solution in the next update, I hope you'll use it again in the future.
Try my Ultimate Creator, it's a program that makes the creation of characters and missions easier than ever!
Go here if you want to try: Universal Creator

Last Characters I made:
**ZETSU**, Aru-, boss1234a, GazeRockNotDead, l-o-w, MShougo, mukanle, no-games, orochimaru--sama, Rhaenys, rodrigorosendo, Sorina-Hokage, TRIPLEX, uchihalik.
Admins online: 0 - Global moderators online: 0 - Moderators online: 2 - Members online: 12