The Fifth Hokage Tsunade (S) ~ by crazysom


 Topic: The Fifth Hokage Tsunade (S) ~ by crazysom
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Poll: Do you like her?
6 vote(s) since March 15, 2013 18:58
Yes (4) (67%)
No (2) (33%)
  Posted on March 15, 2013 14:13
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  Posted on March 15, 2013 14:20
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#2
That 5 aff dmg to herself after CES is not needed, becouse focusing chakra isnt hurting anyone 8/10 nice work
  Posted on March 15, 2013 14:22
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_migelon_1 wrote:
That 5 aff dmg to herself after CES is not needed, becouse focusing chakra isnt hurting anyone 8/10 nice work
The whole character like in the anime costs too much chakra and she suffers from costing it too much. So that is why this skill and CC deal to her so little damage - the cost for a huge power.

By the way, thanks for cnc)
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  Posted on March 15, 2013 14:27
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Actually my Tsunade was a challenge given by sanin-orochi to me :oh
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  Posted on March 15, 2013 14:28
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#5
Good character
1st skill 1 cooldown is enough and i think its better when she is weakened it will cost 1 less random (for better balance) and it u want to make it similar to the anime besides if your attacks get weaker the amount of chakra which is spent will become lesser
2nd skill same improvements as the 1st
Last two skills are good that way
Good flow and seems original too
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  Posted on March 15, 2013 14:28
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Rasengan_89 wrote:
Actually my Tsunade was a challenge given by sanin-orochi to me :oh
I've written in your tsunade's topic that will challange you with mine :oh
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  Posted on March 15, 2013 14:32
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blueskull119 wrote:
Good character
1st skill 1 cooldown is enough and i think its better when she is weakened it will cost 1 less random (for better balance) and it u want to make it similar to the anime besides if your attacks get weaker the amount of chakra which is spent will become lesser
2nd skill same improvements as the 1st
Last two skills are good that way
Good flow and seems original too
8.7
Thanks blue) I thought of reducing teh cost by 1 random while weakened but refused from it, anyway as you say it will be better than ok :oh And thanks for cnc, really a good help to me :smile

EDIT: a bit fixed 1st and 2nd skills - both have 1 cooldown and while weakened cost 1 less random chakra.
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  Posted on March 15, 2013 15:16
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need more cnc people!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :sad :cry
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  Posted on March 15, 2013 15:18
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  Posted on March 15, 2013 15:20
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kyuubinaru wrote:
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thanks kyuubi) more cnc?)
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  Posted on March 15, 2013 21:03
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bumping up for everything) of course raaates and cnc :cheesy
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  Posted on March 16, 2013 02:56
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86/100
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  Posted on March 16, 2013 10:15
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only one? where others?(
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  Posted on March 16, 2013 11:10
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8/10 :cool :cool
  Posted on March 16, 2013 11:14
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She's good, I like her. 9
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