Tayuya by vini1904


 Topic: Tayuya by vini1904
Users reading this topic: There are no members reading this topic.
  Posted on March 13, 2013 22:12
vini1904
Rank: member

Forum Rank:
Black Cat

Posts: 58
Joined on:
December 18, 2008
#1
Rate and CnC please

  Posted on March 13, 2013 22:19
koskillz
Rank: member

Forum Rank:
Bloodthirsty Vampire

Posts: 1247
Joined on:
December 21, 2008
#2
7/10.

I like it, few grammar mistakes and the description is not all that good.

Doki Summoning seems slightly OP while Genjutsu Hell is severely UP. I mean.. Itachi does 13 Affliction permanently for just 1 Nin.
  Posted on March 13, 2013 22:20
vini1904
Rank: member

Forum Rank:
Black Cat

Posts: 58
Joined on:
December 18, 2008
#3
koskillz wrote:
7/10.

I like it, few grammar mistakes and the description is not all that good.

Doki Summoning seems slightly OP while Genjutsu Hell is severely UP. I mean.. Itachi does 13 Affliction permanently for just 1 Nin.

I will edit, can you tell me what mistakes I commit?
  Posted on March 13, 2013 22:21
ultio
Rank: member

Forum Rank:
Bloodthirsty Vampire

Posts: 1571
Joined on:
February 1, 2013
#4
8 nice

My showcase- Gfx shop Bg-tutorial Callum Made my Sig and nino made my avy
  Posted on March 13, 2013 22:22
Ninjakiller2
Rank: member

Forum Rank:
Howling Werewolf

Posts: 544
Joined on:
August 9, 2009
#5
koskillz wrote:
7/10.

I like it, few grammar mistakes and the description is not all that good.

Doki Summoning seems slightly OP while Genjutsu Hell is severely UP. I mean.. Itachi does 13 Affliction permanently for just 1 Nin.

but if itachi dies it goes away .... i think it is pretty balanced 8

  Posted on March 13, 2013 22:26
koskillz
Rank: member

Forum Rank:
Bloodthirsty Vampire

Posts: 1247
Joined on:
December 21, 2008
#6
Ninjakiller2 wrote:
koskillz wrote:
7/10.

I like it, few grammar mistakes and the description is not all that good.

Doki Summoning seems slightly OP while Genjutsu Hell is severely UP. I mean.. Itachi does 13 Affliction permanently for just 1 Nin.

but if itachi dies it goes away .... i think it is pretty balanced 8

Look at Sasori then..
  Posted on March 13, 2013 22:37
Adaption
Rank: member

Forum Rank:
Wicked Witch

Posts: 226
Joined on:
February 7, 2013
#7
8/10 good character man
  Posted on March 13, 2013 22:41
conthedon
Rank: member

Forum Rank:
Wicked Witch

Posts: 226
Joined on:
February 16, 2013
#8
koskillz wrote:
7/10.

I like it, few grammar mistakes and the description is not all that good.

Doki Summoning seems slightly OP while Genjutsu Hell is severely UP. I mean.. Itachi does 13 Affliction permanently for just 1 Nin.
This^
  Posted on March 13, 2013 22:42
khaosking
Rank: member

Forum Rank:
Pumpkaboo

Posts: 23
Joined on:
March 6, 2013
#9
ultio wrote:
8 nice
  Posted on March 13, 2013 22:50
Likkyy
Rank: member

Forum Rank:
Wicked Witch

Posts: 286
Joined on:
July 18, 2011
#10
koskillz wrote:
7/10.

I like it, few grammar mistakes and the description is not all that good.

Doki Summoning seems slightly OP while Genjutsu Hell is severely UP. I mean.. Itachi does 13 Affliction permanently for just 1 Nin.

Torune deals 7 affliction damage permanent for a bloodline but in sixth skills u should tell when will this skil end
http://i.imgur.com/cLcKj.gif{/IMG] http://i50.tinypic.com/ruwpzc.jpg http://i1285.photobucket.com/albums/a596/Likkyy/fdf_zps0b7a6497.png

Check out my Showcase,and check out my Zetsu,it is my best character and don't
forget to leave your rate :teeth.
  Posted on March 13, 2013 22:51
Rasengan_89
Rank: member

Forum Rank:
Superhero

Posts: 5776
Joined on:
March 1, 2008
#11
6/10
>> Latest Character: The Ethereal Samurai Fox ~ Best Improved CC Maker in 2013!

All my characters are going through rework (slowly) ~ OMG IT'S OVER 27 THOUSAND views, thanks a lot! ~ Achievement Unlocked: Defeat OP Sahedy ~ MitiS is HERE
  Posted on March 13, 2013 22:53
ShikadasOmbra
Rank: member

Forum Rank:
Howling Werewolf

Posts: 546
Joined on:
July 12, 2011
#12
9/10... Very good i like so much
Avy By : Noni
  Posted on March 13, 2013 22:54
dragdrag
Rank: member

Forum Rank:
Bloodthirsty Vampire

Posts: 1057
Joined on:
November 29, 2008
#13
You must be in fourth grade with that grammar.

Pictures are okay, attacks could be a bit.. more.

5/10
A wise man once said..... Fuck The Bullshit.
  Posted on March 13, 2013 23:33
sasu_laka
Rank: member

Forum Rank:
Unruly Demon

Posts: 17772
Joined on:
November 21, 2010
#14
6
  Posted on March 13, 2013 23:42
sasukejay
Rank: member

Forum Rank:
Bloodthirsty Vampire

Posts: 2502
Joined on:
September 19, 2007
#15
koskillz wrote:
7/10.

I like it, few grammar mistakes and the description is not all that good.

Doki Summoning seems slightly OP while Genjutsu Hell is severely UP. I mean.. Itachi does 13 Affliction permanently for just 1 Nin.

agree
|| Sig by Orochi || Recruitment || Chat II Thread ||

|| Best Friend || Birdman || Beater || Beaner || Da boo || Maid ||
I don't know why I sleep with my eyes wide open hoping that I find you