Tayuya by vini1904


 Topic: Tayuya by vini1904
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  Posted on March 13, 2013 22:12
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#1
Rate and CnC please :cool

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  Posted on March 13, 2013 22:19
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#2
7/10.

I like it, few grammar mistakes and the description is not all that good.

Doki Summoning seems slightly OP while Genjutsu Hell is severely UP. I mean.. Itachi does 13 Affliction permanently for just 1 Nin.
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  Posted on March 13, 2013 22:20
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koskillz wrote:
7/10.

I like it, few grammar mistakes and the description is not all that good.

Doki Summoning seems slightly OP while Genjutsu Hell is severely UP. I mean.. Itachi does 13 Affliction permanently for just 1 Nin.

I will edit, can you tell me what mistakes I commit?
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  Posted on March 13, 2013 22:21
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#4
8 nice :amused
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  Posted on March 13, 2013 22:22
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koskillz wrote:
7/10.

I like it, few grammar mistakes and the description is not all that good.

Doki Summoning seems slightly OP while Genjutsu Hell is severely UP. I mean.. Itachi does 13 Affliction permanently for just 1 Nin.

but if itachi dies it goes away .... i think it is pretty balanced 8
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  Posted on March 13, 2013 22:26
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Ninjakiller2 wrote:
koskillz wrote:
7/10.

I like it, few grammar mistakes and the description is not all that good.

Doki Summoning seems slightly OP while Genjutsu Hell is severely UP. I mean.. Itachi does 13 Affliction permanently for just 1 Nin.

but if itachi dies it goes away .... i think it is pretty balanced 8

Look at Sasori then..
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  Posted on March 13, 2013 22:37
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#7
8/10 good character man
  Posted on March 13, 2013 22:41
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#8
koskillz wrote:
7/10.

I like it, few grammar mistakes and the description is not all that good.

Doki Summoning seems slightly OP while Genjutsu Hell is severely UP. I mean.. Itachi does 13 Affliction permanently for just 1 Nin.
This^
  Posted on March 13, 2013 22:42
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ultio wrote:
8 nice :amused
  Posted on March 13, 2013 22:50
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#10
koskillz wrote:
7/10.

I like it, few grammar mistakes and the description is not all that good.

Doki Summoning seems slightly OP while Genjutsu Hell is severely UP. I mean.. Itachi does 13 Affliction permanently for just 1 Nin.

Torune deals 7 affliction damage permanent for a bloodline but in sixth skills u should tell when will this skil end
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  Posted on March 13, 2013 22:51
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6/10
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  Posted on March 13, 2013 22:53
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#12
9/10... Very good i like so much :laugh
  Posted on March 13, 2013 22:54
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#13
You must be in fourth grade with that grammar.

Pictures are okay, attacks could be a bit.. more.

5/10 :oh

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  Posted on March 13, 2013 23:33
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  Posted on March 13, 2013 23:42
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koskillz wrote:
7/10.

I like it, few grammar mistakes and the description is not all that good.

Doki Summoning seems slightly OP while Genjutsu Hell is severely UP. I mean.. Itachi does 13 Affliction permanently for just 1 Nin.

agree
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