~:: World War Raikage A (Manga)::~ By Enaki


 Topic: ~:: World War Raikage A (Manga)::~ By Enaki
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  Posted on March 8, 2013 04:17
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Hello All, Enaki here, and I'm sorry if this is late, but I really didn't have a choice since I was preoccupied all day with friends. This character took some thought process, and I'm not sure if he's OP or UP, but still here he is, and I'd like to know how he is.

Rate and CnC, and please explain your rate if it is under 8.5. I'd also love your input on this character since I'm really unsure how this one went, and I'd like some opinions on how to make him better. And please note, ALL Skills last one more turn on him, meaning a one turn stun can last two turns, a draining skill can last more, instant skills can stack upon him, and so much more, making all his invincible damage reduction a liability at the same time. If you have any other questions, please ask them.

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  Posted on March 8, 2013 04:52
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Does the skills which last 1 more turn due to the 1st skill can they be removed with the 3rd skill, in the mean time i'll assume that it does.
This character is nicely balanced, after reading the 1st skill for sec. i thought it was a bit OP but the 2nd and 3rd skills help the balance since he increases damage dealt to himself, also the 2nd skill makes damage dealt to him affliction.
The flow is tremendous and the concept is nicely applied.
9.4
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  Posted on March 8, 2013 18:20
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BUMP

Just wanting to hear more comments right now, positive or negative, unless the negative counts as spam or flame, then I don't want any of that.
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  Posted on March 8, 2013 18:58
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It's very simple&nice, and original as always.
He's too vulnerable IMO .. the fact he doesn't have an invulnerability skill is bad ;/

- Increase damage dealt by 3rd skill to 20 or only leave 1 taijutsu as cost

Try to improve that facepic D:

8.6/10
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  Posted on March 8, 2013 19:29
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hello
Yeah, facepic is not the best at all
4th is is permanent?
Anyway, I don't find abything bad in him
He is original, good balanced, unique
Just.....good xd
I really like it

Maybe I don't like a fact that his offensive skills have cooldowns, and in 1vs1 situation he can just reset his armor and wait for good chakra, which makes him a little OP.
Anyway, good job
  Posted on March 9, 2013 14:16
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9.5/10

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