~:: World War Tsunade (Manga) ::~ By Enaki

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Posted on March 7, 2013 18:31

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Hello All, Enaki here, with a new character based on my old Tsunade Concept, just a little bit more balanced, if ever so slightly, and I'd love to know how I did, not much else to say here other than this took me no less than 20 Minutes to make.

Rate and CnC, and please explain your rate if it is under 8.5, and I'd love to see some input on this character, and please tell me if her second skill is appropriately cost and cooldown effective, since I was unsure.

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Posted on March 7, 2013 18:36

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I swear you made a character I always wanted to make, but I was too lazy for :laugh

EDIT:
I really like this concept.
Reducing the amount enemies heal and use it with a skill to make an ally dea lextra damage.
Imho there is only one problem:
What if you face a team who doesn't heal in any way?

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Posted on March 7, 2013 18:41

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Nice character Enaki
I like the concept
You forgot the unique class in the 1st, 3rd and the passive skill
She is really balanced and the flow is nice
Well done
9/10

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Posted on March 7, 2013 18:42

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Rasengan_89 wrote:

I swear you made a character I always wanted to make, but I was too lazy for :laugh

Oh, that's easy. Yin Chakra Transfer only targets the amount they can't heal, not the amount they would have healed. And as for a team who couldn't heal in any way, then there's still some use for her, since she can reduce damage for allies, deal potential AoE damage if they affect her second skill, and once again, Yin Chakra Transfer can still affect them.

Anything else?

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Posted on March 7, 2013 18:43

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Posted on March 7, 2013 18:49

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blueskull119 wrote:

Nice character Enaki
I like the concept
You forgot the unique class in the 1st, 3rd and the passive skill
She is really balanced and the flow is nice
Well done
9/10

Yeah, I kinda did forget the unique class in the 3rd and Passive, thanks for that, I edited it. However, I won't call the 1st skill unique since we've seen other shinobi use Medical Ninjutsu.

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Posted on March 7, 2013 18:50

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Nothing to say, but the damage reduction of the first skill doesn't flow with the whole concept (reducing amount healed by skills).

After all another good manga characters of yours :D

Posted on March 7, 2013 18:54

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Rasengan_89 wrote:

Nothing to say, but the damage reduction of the first skill doesn't flow with the whole concept (reducing amount healed by skills).

After all another good manga characters of yours :D

I really, and I mean REALLY wanted to add more with this Tsunade, but I thought that simple was best with her, so I tried to keep her simple. Not to mention, this keeps her allies have a little more life when they get healed, even if it's just a little. I thought it was just something to add into that. I could've done more, but I thought that was best. Still, a good point.

Thanks though.

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Posted on March 7, 2013 18:56

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U jobless bitch

This shit sucks

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Posted on March 7, 2013 18:57

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Enaki_Renraku wrote:

Rasengan_89 wrote:

Nothing to say, but the damage reduction of the first skill doesn't flow with the whole concept (reducing amount healed by skills).

After all another good manga characters of yours :D

You did a good job, but I still prefer onoki xD

Posted on March 7, 2013 19:00

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Very good char bro :teeth

don't forget to create the same char when this char will be in anime :teeth

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Posted on March 7, 2013 19:07

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I have to disagree with Rasengan here.
I prefer Tsunade, actually she's really better than Oonoki.
She's not based on two simple stacks.
She's not relying only on the use of 2 skills.
But on the 1st skill, can she heal herself if she's the only one?
The third skill is kinda confusing because of the wording, you may want to reword it but I like the concept and the flow.
In the third skill, you mean to put flow with the other 2 but it's a little confusing.
But yes, this is a successful character.

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Posted on March 7, 2013 19:12

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Sorry about the confusion.

With the first skill, if she is the only one on her team, she can heal herself, but if she or one ally is left, she can heal that ally too. With the third skill, it does put flow between the first and third skills, so tell me what's confusing about it, and I can do my best to either explain, or edit for a better explanation.

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Posted on March 7, 2013 19:16

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godbot wrote:

About the flow thing - it uses the reduced amounts of the first 2 skills, right?

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Posted on March 7, 2013 19:29

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Enaki_Renraku wrote:

godbot wrote:

About the flow thing - it uses the reduced amounts of the first 2 skills, right?

Correct, Sir Godbot.

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