Susanoo ET Itachi (s)


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  Posted on February 21, 2013 07:50
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Cnc this character and tell how can i improve him.
If he is good that way state that nothing should be changed
If there is anything u don't understand tell and i shall explain
Point out any errors or mistakes

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  Posted on February 21, 2013 08:12
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  Posted on February 21, 2013 08:30
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Thanks but your rate is not helping me at all, i need a cnc
Come on people cnc this character please
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  Posted on February 21, 2013 08:39
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Since you always CnC me ill do it too :)

The note you put in the describiton is useless, since there is no possible way he can take affliciton damage (due to the first skill). Its a nice prep. The second skilll should stun just physical and melee and deal 20 piercing. Now the third skill is super UP. It should either start with 20 damage or loose that 1 random chakra. But the way it is now its ultra UP. For the third skill i suggest you should make seperate sentences and not comas, because its very hard to understand. He should get more Dr if you ask me, cause he is super up the way he is now. Make it 1 red and random and give me 50% dr.

Pics arent the best. You are putting too much dark into them.

8/10 for now :cool
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  Posted on February 21, 2013 08:46
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blueskull119 wrote:
Cnc this character and tell how can i improve him.
If he is good that way state that nothing should be changed
If there is anything u don't understand tell and i shall explain
Point out any errors or mistakes

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Finally i see a nice ET Itachi

I like how Cloak is boosting Yasaka no Magatama , although i think u could let it cost only 1 random...With his skill set it's only bound to be targeted 1st.

As for the pics , i think everyone has a subjective view regarding pics , so if u do like them darker to me it's fine... as long as they represent the skill and are not blurry.

  Posted on February 21, 2013 09:00
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Okay so i will make the 3rd skill cost 1 random less and 4th skill 1 random or should i make it 1 bloodline and 1 random with 50% damage reduction
If u have any other suggestions please tell me
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  Posted on February 21, 2013 09:06
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Okay so i will make the 3rd skill cost 1 random less and 4th skill 1 random or should i make it 1 bloodline and 1 random with 50% damage reduction
If u have any other suggestions please tell me
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  Posted on February 21, 2013 09:30
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valyo wrote:
Since you always CnC me ill do it too :)

The note you put in the describiton is useless, since there is no possible way he can take affliciton damage (due to the first skill). Its a nice prep. The second skilll should stun just physical and melee and deal 20 piercing. Now the third skill is super UP. It should either start with 20 damage or loose that 1 random chakra. But the way it is now its ultra UP. For the third skill i suggest you should make seperate sentences and not comas, because its very hard to understand. He should get more Dr if you ask me, cause he is super up the way he is now. Make it 1 red and random and give me 50% dr.

Pics arent the best. You are putting too much dark into them.

8/10 for now :cool

This. Plus, I find the storage idea too similar to my Shukaku's :tounge
Good concept and seems flow perfectly.
Third skill is too costly, I mean, in order of dealing a lot of damage u gotta wait at least 2 turns xD
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  Posted on February 21, 2013 09:41
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valyo wrote:
Since you always CnC me ill do it too :)

The note you put in the describiton is useless, since there is no possible way he can take affliciton damage (due to the first skill). Its a nice prep. The second skilll should stun just physical and melee and deal 20 piercing. Now the third skill is super UP. It should either start with 20 damage or loose that 1 random chakra. But the way it is now its ultra UP. For the third skill i suggest you should make seperate sentences and not comas, because its very hard to understand. He should get more Dr if you ask me, cause he is super up the way he is now. Make it 1 red and random and give me 50% dr.

Pics arent the best. You are putting too much dark into them.

8/10 for now :cool

This. Plus, I find the storage idea too similar to my Shukaku's :tounge
Good concept and seems flow perfectly.
Third skill is too costly, I mean, in order of dealing a lot of damage u gotta wait at least 2 turns xD
Thanks a lot Rasengan
I tried to make the changes which were suggested by Valyo and Vladimix but as soon as i uploaded the character with the new changes i found white spots all over the pics and i posted this character as my entry in COTY and its really embarrassing to enter with white spots all over the pics
So i will keep it the way it is for now
Thanks again Rasengan and thank u Valyo also thanks Vladimix
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  Posted on February 21, 2013 16:20
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  Posted on February 21, 2013 17:03
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8.5/10
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  Posted on February 21, 2013 17:34
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  Posted on February 23, 2013 13:42
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  Posted on February 23, 2013 15:13
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GOOD CHAR 9/10:rolleyes
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  Posted on February 23, 2013 16:39
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Thank u all


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