Uchiha Itachi (S) REWORKED ~ By stalkersom

stalkersom Rank: member Forum Rank: Jounin Posts: 1118 Joined on: January 22, 2011

#1 LAST CHAR 3 Main Rules: ~Rate and CnC. ~If your rate is under 8 please explain or will be ignored ~If you find grammar mistakes please tell me and show if possible ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- CHARACTER ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Edit: The 1st skill - added a stun effect; 2nd skill - increased basic damage by 5; FP - cropped better now Click on the banner to see my Showcase ~ Click on the Face Pic to see my Last Created Char^

jaylonp Rank: member Forum Rank: Genin Posts: 176 Joined on: December 13, 2009

#2 its lil confusing and i dont like how he doesnt have skill that actually do damage its only affliction base 6/10

blueskull119 Rank: member Forum Rank: Jounin Posts: 1302 Joined on: June 23, 2009

#3 3rd skill is mental This one is better than your last Itachi Well balanced 8.5

stalkersom Rank: member Forum Rank: Jounin Posts: 1118 Joined on: January 22, 2011

#4 thanks guys, as to his damage, I didn't want him to be a rusher, only a supportive Click on the banner to see my Showcase ~ Click on the Face Pic to see my Last Created Char^

shadowlaka Rank: member Forum Rank: Sannin Posts: 5531 Joined on: December 9, 2012

#5 m.sharingan is mental 8.

jilsen-kun Rank: member Forum Rank: Chuunin Posts: 284 Joined on: November 27, 2009

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stalkersom Rank: member Forum Rank: Jounin Posts: 1118 Joined on: January 22, 2011

#7 UPDATE 3d skill is now mental Thanks shadow and jilsen Click on the banner to see my Showcase ~ Click on the Face Pic to see my Last Created Char^

delax321 Rank: member Forum Rank: Jounin Posts: 2833 Joined on: August 20, 2009

#8 ill give it a 8/10 looks good ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Showcase/ Delax321 Image Shop/ Gear Shop ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

stalkersom Rank: member Forum Rank: Jounin Posts: 1118 Joined on: January 22, 2011

#9 thanks but why do you decrease your rate by 2? Click on the banner to see my Showcase ~ Click on the Face Pic to see my Last Created Char^

stalkersom Rank: member Forum Rank: Jounin Posts: 1118 Joined on: January 22, 2011

#10 need more rates! Click on the banner to see my Showcase ~ Click on the Face Pic to see my Last Created Char^

sanin-orochi Rank: member Forum Rank: Jounin Posts: 1063 Joined on: November 16, 2009

#11 Hi there Rating: - Tsukyome is UP, make it also stun the first enemy to use a offensive skill - Make Amaterasu deal 10 affliction damage aside from the "each skill effect" - Mangekyou is fine. - Flow is decent, but as I already said, you could do something more creative to spice him up Overall: 8/10 Spoiler you called Rasen too.. D-:<

Rasengan_89 Rank: member Forum Rank: Sannin Posts: 3669 Joined on: March 1, 2008

#12 I like how each skill has got a different class, which makes him avalaible to use whatever skill. Hmm a bit slow, too many CDs, but I like the idea. I guess there is a concept being it and good flow. 8.5 Sig Stock by tremblax ~ First to ever make a Naruto Bijuu Mode ~ IT'S OVER 10 THOUSAND views, thanks a lot! Avy made by ME, Stock by Andrezoe ~ Want to be a Character Maker ? ~ It seems somebody paid you enough money to live without working, SvN. ~

stalkersom Rank: member Forum Rank: Jounin Posts: 1118 Joined on: January 22, 2011

#13 sanin-orochi wrote: Hi there Rating: - Tsukyome is UP, make it also stun the first enemy to use a offensive skill - Make Amaterasu deal 10 affliction damage aside from the "each skill effect" - Mangekyou is fine. - Flow is decent, but as I already said, you could do something more creative to spice him up Overall: 8/10 Spoiler you called Rasen too.. thanks guys for your rates, will fix him. As Bijuu Mode participant, I couldn't help calling all my teammates Click on the banner to see my Showcase ~ Click on the Face Pic to see my Last Created Char^

Narutorazengan25 Rank: member Forum Rank: Jinchuuriki Posts: 17012 Joined on: September 24, 2009

#14 The crop in the FP is not so good with the balance, maybe a little UP, but with the idea and flow, is great! maybe 10 affliction in the second skill, and maybe less cooldown in some skills, just maybe! <.< ~By Kenny Perfect Character, By my sofi♥:

stalkersom Rank: member Forum Rank: Jounin Posts: 1118 Joined on: January 22, 2011

#15 Narutorazengan25 wrote: The crop in the FP is not so good with the balance, maybe a little UP, but with the idea and flow, is great! maybe 10 affliction in the second skill, and maybe less cooldown in some skills, just maybe! <.< ~By Kenny thanks Kenny, I took into account your notes about 2nd skill ,as well as the 1st skill and fixed the, thanks for your help) Click on the banner to see my Showcase ~ Click on the Face Pic to see my Last Created Char^

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