Uchiha Itachi (S) REWORKED ~ By stalkersom


 Topic: Uchiha Itachi (S) REWORKED ~ By stalkersom
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  Posted on February 10, 2013 15:01
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~Rate and CnC.
~If your rate is under 8 please explain or will be ignored
~If you find grammar mistakes please tell me and show if possible

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Edit: The 1st skill - added a stun effect; 2nd skill - increased basic damage by 5; FP - cropped better now
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  Posted on February 10, 2013 15:09
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#2
its lil confusing and i dont like how he doesnt have skill that actually do damage its only affliction base 6/10
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  Posted on February 10, 2013 15:11
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#3
3rd skill is mental
This one is better than your last Itachi
Well balanced
8.5

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  Posted on February 10, 2013 15:13
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thanks guys, as to his damage, I didn't want him to be a rusher, only a supportive :smile
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  Posted on February 10, 2013 15:15
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#5
m.sharingan is mental

8.
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  Posted on February 10, 2013 15:17
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8
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Coz fuck that shit
  Posted on February 10, 2013 15:18
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UPDATE
3d skill is now mental

Thanks shadow and jilsen
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  Posted on February 10, 2013 15:32
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#8
ill give it a 8/10 looks good
  Posted on February 10, 2013 15:41
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thanks but why do you decrease your rate by 2?
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  Posted on February 10, 2013 16:36
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#10
need more rates!
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  Posted on February 10, 2013 19:15
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#11
Hi there :amused

Rating:

- Tsukyome is UP, make it also stun the first enemy to use a offensive skill

- Make Amaterasu deal 10 affliction damage aside from the "each skill effect"

- Mangekyou is fine.

- Flow is decent, but as I already said, you could do something more creative to spice him up

Overall: 8/10
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you called Rasen too.. D-:<
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  Posted on February 10, 2013 19:16
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#12
I like how each skill has got a different class, which makes him avalaible to use whatever skill.
Hmm a bit slow, too many CDs, but I like the idea.
I guess there is a concept being it and good flow.

8.5
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  Posted on February 10, 2013 19:20
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sanin-orochi wrote:
Hi there :amused

Rating:

- Tsukyome is UP, make it also stun the first enemy to use a offensive skill

- Make Amaterasu deal 10 affliction damage aside from the "each skill effect"

- Mangekyou is fine.

- Flow is decent, but as I already said, you could do something more creative to spice him up

Overall: 8/10
Spoiler
you called Rasen too.. :noworry
thanks guys for your rates, will fix him. As Bijuu Mode participant, I couldn't help calling all my teammates :smile
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  Posted on February 10, 2013 19:25
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#14
The crop in the FP is not so good
with the balance, maybe a little UP, but with the idea and flow, is great!

maybe 10 affliction in the second skill, and maybe less cooldown in some skills, just maybe! <.<

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  Posted on February 10, 2013 20:25
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#15
Narutorazengan25 wrote:
The crop in the FP is not so good
with the balance, maybe a little UP, but with the idea and flow, is great!

maybe 10 affliction in the second skill, and maybe less cooldown in some skills, just maybe! <.<

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thanks Kenny, I took into account your notes about 2nd skill ,as well as the 1st skill and fixed the, thanks for your help)
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