Tobi by Orochidosu


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  Posted on February 8, 2013 13:29
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Yay for using an N-A account that is literally on the borderline of being a dead account. Anyway, since this is a Naruto site, I would figure I would post this here, seeing as how I have already posted it on Soul Boards. Anyway, I won't blab on.

Please explain your rates, even if they are 10/10 and credit for pictures goes to Batman's imageshop on Soul Boards. That is all.

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  Posted on February 8, 2013 13:48
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Deals Double Double
Unique
Seems Balance to me
7/10

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  Posted on February 8, 2013 13:50
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Bad grammar, very simplistic, OP, Not very good pictures, does not flow out. In other words: Garbage.

3/10
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  Posted on February 8, 2013 13:51
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lilnaruto_legend wrote:
Bad grammar, very simplistic, OP, Not very good pictures, does not flow out. In other words: Garbage.

3/10

Copy and pasting my CnC of someone else's character from another topic only makes you look like a moron. Try again.

On second thought, don't. You'll only embarrass yourself further.
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  Posted on February 8, 2013 14:01
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orochidosu wrote:
lilnaruto_legend wrote:
Bad grammar, very simplistic, OP, Not very good pictures, does not flow out. In other words: Garbage.

3/10

Copy and pasting my CnC of someone else's character from another topic only makes you look like a moron. Try again.

On second thought, don't. You'll only embarrass yourself further.
I did it because your CNC on that character was extremely rude and unhelpful. I'm not at all embarrassed though because I know ,if I respected you enough, I could CNC this character easily. So, try again.
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  Posted on February 8, 2013 14:03
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orochidosu wrote:
lilnaruto_legend wrote:
Bad grammar, very simplistic, OP, Not very good pictures, does not flow out. In other words: Garbage.

3/10

Copy and pasting my CnC of someone else's character from another topic only makes you look like a moron. Try again.

On second thought, don't. You'll only embarrass yourself further.
Lol Burn. anyways on topic@ 8/10 i like it
  Posted on February 8, 2013 14:04
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lilnaruto_legend wrote:
orochidosu wrote:
lilnaruto_legend wrote:
Bad grammar, very simplistic, OP, Not very good pictures, does not flow out. In other words: Garbage.

3/10

Copy and pasting my CnC of someone else's character from another topic only makes you look like a moron. Try again.

On second thought, don't. You'll only embarrass yourself further.
I did it because your CNC on that character was extremely rude and unhelpful. I'm not at all embarrassed though because I know ,if I respected you enough, I could CNC this character easily. So, try again.

Oh please, I could be a lot worse if I wanted to. Besides, you aren't even reviewing this properly. Instead, you're deciding to act like a dumbarse and write some stupid statement simply because I made a review of someone else's character that you didn't like.

Now I will say this once and once only:

Actually rate the character properly like you are supposed to when rating a character or don't bother commenting. It is that simple.
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  Posted on February 8, 2013 14:12
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6
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  Posted on February 8, 2013 14:13
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7/10 e.e
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  Posted on February 8, 2013 14:13
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orochidosu wrote:
lilnaruto_legend wrote:
orochidosu wrote:
Copy and pasting my CnC of someone else's character from another topic only makes you look like a moron. Try again.

On second thought, don't. You'll only embarrass yourself further.
I did it because your CNC on that character was extremely rude and unhelpful. I'm not at all embarrassed though because I know ,if I respected you enough, I could CNC this character easily. So, try again.

Oh please, I could be a lot worse if I wanted to. Besides, you aren't even reviewing this properly. Instead, you're deciding to act like a dumbarse and write some stupid statement simply because I made a review of someone else's character that you didn't like.

Now I will say this once and once only:

Actually rate the character properly like you are supposed to when rating a character or don't bother commenting. It is that simple.
I planned on it because honestly; this character is really unbalanced.

Teleportation is extremely OP. The effect of ignoring all harmful skills for 2 turns is OP in and of itself but adding the damage and invisibility makes it way to powerful.

Elite sharingan is OP because it reflects any skill and does not expire. This skill combined with others like the first would create a combo far to OP.

Kamui is good but the double the damaging effect seems slightly OP. Maybe make it 80 or 75 damage?

Intangibility is probably my biggest problem with this character. The combination of the first skill and this one basically makes it to where he can be invulnerable the whole game. The idea is good but just to much invisible skills for me. Nobody would ever attack him.

Pics: 1/1
Grammar: .8/1
Presentation: 2.5/3
Balance 2.5/5

Overall: 6.8/10
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  Posted on February 8, 2013 14:13
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lord_jiraiya wrote:
6

Thank you for the rate. Any additional thoughts?
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  Posted on February 8, 2013 14:15
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  Posted on February 8, 2013 14:21
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lilnaruto_legend wrote:
orochidosu wrote:
lilnaruto_legend wrote:
I did it because your CNC on that character was extremely rude and unhelpful. I'm not at all embarrassed though because I know ,if I respected you enough, I could CNC this character easily. So, try again.

Oh please, I could be a lot worse if I wanted to. Besides, you aren't even reviewing this properly. Instead, you're deciding to act like a dumbarse and write some stupid statement simply because I made a review of someone else's character that you didn't like.

Now I will say this once and once only:

Actually rate the character properly like you are supposed to when rating a character or don't bother commenting. It is that simple.
I planned on it because honestly; this character is really unbalanced.

Teleportation is extremely OP. The effect of ignoring all harmful skills for 2 turns is OP in and of itself but adding the damage and invisibility makes it way to powerful.

Elite sharingan is OP because it reflects any skill and does not expire. This skill combined with others like the first would create a combo far to OP.

Kamui is good but the double the damaging effect seems slightly OP. Maybe make it 80 or 75 damage?

Intangibility is probably my biggest problem with this character. The combination of the first skill and this one basically makes it to where he can be invulnerable the whole game. The idea is good but just to much invisible skills for me. Nobody would ever attack him.

Pics: 1/1
Grammar: .8/1
Presentation: 2.5/3
Balance 2.5/5

Overall: 6.8/10

At least you actually made a CnC instead of acting more like a mongoloid

In terms of Teleportation, there are stronger ignore skills. I admit it is a tad OP but I supplemented that by making this character costly.

Eye Sharingan does not expire however once it is triggered it ends. Plus you can't constantly reapply it since A: I didn't mention this but the cooldown of the skill actually starts when the skill is triggered and B: It can't be used while active.

Kamui was originally 35 with a 70 max damage but I felt that was a little UP considering it is his only attack skill as someone pointed out on S-B and I think on here.

As for Intangibility, I respectfully disagree. The fact they both cripple each other as well as the cost and the long cooldowns means no, it would not make it impossible for Tobi to lose. But as I said, he is designed to be extremely difficult to kill. Like the character in the show itself.
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  Posted on February 8, 2013 14:25
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orochidosu wrote:
lilnaruto_legend wrote:
orochidosu wrote:
Oh please, I could be a lot worse if I wanted to. Besides, you aren't even reviewing this properly. Instead, you're deciding to act like a dumbarse and write some stupid statement simply because I made a review of someone else's character that you didn't like.

Now I will say this once and once only:

Actually rate the character properly like you are supposed to when rating a character or don't bother commenting. It is that simple.
I planned on it because honestly; this character is really unbalanced.

Teleportation is extremely OP. The effect of ignoring all harmful skills for 2 turns is OP in and of itself but adding the damage and invisibility makes it way to powerful.

Elite sharingan is OP because it reflects any skill and does not expire. This skill combined with others like the first would create a combo far to OP.

Kamui is good but the double the damaging effect seems slightly OP. Maybe make it 80 or 75 damage?

Intangibility is probably my biggest problem with this character. The combination of the first skill and this one basically makes it to where he can be invulnerable the whole game. The idea is good but just to much invisible skills for me. Nobody would ever attack him.

Pics: 1/1
Grammar: .8/1
Presentation: 2.5/3
Balance 2.5/5

Overall: 6.8/10

At least you actually made a CnC instead of acting more like a mongoloid

In terms of Teleportation, there are stronger ignore skills. I admit it is a tad OP but I supplemented that by making this character costly.

Eye Sharingan does not expire however once it is triggered it ends. Plus you can't constantly reapply it since A: I didn't mention this but the cooldown of the skill actually starts when the skill is triggered and B: It can't be used while active.

Kamui was originally 35 with a 70 max damage but I felt that was a little UP considering it is his only attack skill as someone pointed out on S-B and I think on here.

As for Intangibility, I respectfully disagree. The fact they both cripple each other as well as the cost and the long cooldowns means no, it would not make it impossible for Tobi to lose. But as I said, he is designed to be extremely difficult to kill. Like the character in the show itself.
I understand what you're saying but I think if you stack him up against n-a characters he wouldn't stand a chance. He would be good as an s-a character, maybe, but just not on here.

I do like the character, though. I can't say I'm sorry for quoting you like that but it just bothers me when somebody gives an extremely low rate, tells them the character is bad, and doesn't even tell them any ways to improve. I see it all to much.
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  Posted on February 8, 2013 14:27
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lilnaruto_legend wrote:
orochidosu wrote:
lilnaruto_legend wrote:
I planned on it because honestly; this character is really unbalanced.

Teleportation is extremely OP. The effect of ignoring all harmful skills for 2 turns is OP in and of itself but adding the damage and invisibility makes it way to powerful.

Elite sharingan is OP because it reflects any skill and does not expire. This skill combined with others like the first would create a combo far to OP.

Kamui is good but the double the damaging effect seems slightly OP. Maybe make it 80 or 75 damage?

Intangibility is probably my biggest problem with this character. The combination of the first skill and this one basically makes it to where he can be invulnerable the whole game. The idea is good but just to much invisible skills for me. Nobody would ever attack him.

Pics: 1/1
Grammar: .8/1
Presentation: 2.5/3
Balance 2.5/5

Overall: 6.8/10

At least you actually made a CnC instead of acting more like a mongoloid

In terms of Teleportation, there are stronger ignore skills. I admit it is a tad OP but I supplemented that by making this character costly.

Eye Sharingan does not expire however once it is triggered it ends. Plus you can't constantly reapply it since A: I didn't mention this but the cooldown of the skill actually starts when the skill is triggered and B: It can't be used while active.

Kamui was originally 35 with a 70 max damage but I felt that was a little UP considering it is his only attack skill as someone pointed out on S-B and I think on here.

As for Intangibility, I respectfully disagree. The fact they both cripple each other as well as the cost and the long cooldowns means no, it would not make it impossible for Tobi to lose. But as I said, he is designed to be extremely difficult to kill. Like the character in the show itself.
I understand what you're saying but I think if you stack him up against n-a characters he wouldn't stand a chance. He would be good as an s-a character, maybe, but just not on here.

I do like the character, though. I can't say I'm sorry for quoting you like that but it just bothers me when somebody gives an extremely low rate, tells them the character is bad, and doesn't even tell them any ways to improve. I see it all to much.

There's a very good reason why I didn't tell him to improve. Because he never does. I looked through at least 15-20 of his characters and they were all as terrible as each other.

Anyway, I guess you have a point. I guess because I frequent S-A far more than N-A, I got used to the concept. Nevertheless, thank you for the rate.
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