Jiraiya Sage Mode (S) || Special 50th Char By Rasengan_89


 Topic: Jiraiya Sage Mode (S) || Special 50th Char By Rasengan_89
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  Posted on February 6, 2013 17:06
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- About the facepic
I can't improve it more than this. If anyone can do it better, please send me the face pic and I will change it immediately
- About the pics
I did my best, I am a newbie in making very small pictures, esp in HQ
- About the skills
Just define OP and UP and how should I change it.
- About the grammar
If you find any mistake, report it so I can fix that. I am Italian, you woul help me in improving my English
- About the CnC
I want to read them. Without them I cant improve the character and myself

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  Posted on February 6, 2013 17:07
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1st skill should be control
DAT FLOW! it's amazing.....
4th pics seems.....bad....
it has concept and some damage.....but you can do better :amused
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  Posted on February 6, 2013 17:11
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i like it 9/10 :amused
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  Posted on February 6, 2013 17:14
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Czesio_Poland wrote:
1st skill should be control
DAT FLOW! it's amazing.....
4th pics seems.....bad....
it has concept and some damage.....but you can do better :amused

He is controlling noone :oh
I put action because it sounds logic since only another skill can interrupt it ò_ò but Uhm alright ill put control THANKS :D

@Master, ty :oh
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  Posted on February 6, 2013 17:15
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Congratulations :o.
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  Posted on February 6, 2013 17:16
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It seems really close to tge one that nik made :blink

His first skill is up. 10 damage permanently for 2 energy while beeing canceled if you use a stun... itachi is way better than that. Second skill shows some pretty neat Old Temari style aoe. Third skill is not very original. 4TH pic is bad. Good character and has flow, but i think you can do better D:<

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  Posted on February 6, 2013 17:18
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Rasengan_89 wrote:
Czesio_Poland wrote:
1st skill should be control
DAT FLOW! it's amazing.....
4th pics seems.....bad....
it has concept and some damage.....but you can do better :amused

He is controlling noone :oh
I put action because it sounds logic since only another skill can interrupt it ò_ò but Uhm alright ill put control THANKS :D

@Master, ty :oh

reading description of the 1st skill I was almost sure this is is control :oh
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  Posted on February 6, 2013 17:20
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valyo wrote:
It seems really close to tge one that nik made :blink

His first skill is up. 10 damage permanently for 2 energy while beeing canceled if you use a stun... itachi is way better than that. Second skill shows some pretty neat Old Temari style aoe. Third skill is not very original. 4TH pic is bad. Good character and has flow, but i think you can do better D:<

8/10

Wait :oh
Hold on 1 second :oh
First skill can only end if Jiraiya uses another skill. No stun or anything else may interrupt that skill, thats why I put 1 specific and 1 random chakra :oh
Plus, he will be invulnerable to melee skills every 2 turns (1 turn yes 1 turn no etc etc).
4th skill well :\ Didnt find any better stock, I mean, the screen I saved was pretty dark, anyway ty U_U

@Geki, thanks :cry
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  Posted on February 6, 2013 17:23
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Good character
Nice flow and creative
8/10
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  Posted on February 6, 2013 17:25
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THanks all.
Just noticed that the "&" typo isnt show up, editing.
EDIT: Explain how can I improve this character also!
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  Posted on February 6, 2013 17:44
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  Posted on February 6, 2013 17:49
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Edited typos and edited second skill as well, since I didnt like it much.
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  Posted on February 6, 2013 18:14
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  Posted on February 6, 2013 20:13
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Thank you :amused :amused
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  Posted on February 6, 2013 21:12
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Nice Sage version rasengan) balanced and like his invulnerability state :cool

pics are good, but 2nd and 4th skils' pics could be more sharpened; to me they seem a little bit blur, but ok)

Have nothing to say, simple but creative)

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