Tsokuomi world


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  Posted on February 2, 2013 17:52
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#1
most compleceted char probably :D
so ill add note that should be readed :D
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Note:
first skill:
no it aint activates passive one D:
all effects loose is
No heals, leeches, DD, DR, counter, Reflect, Invulnerability, Stun, chakra cost change and other effects
its on allies too so its not OP
skills will just deal damage or do nothing at all
that means 4 tails will activate his prep skill and wont do anything
just allow other skills too


any more question just ask me :D
ASK ASK ASK and tell if he is OP or UP
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  Posted on February 2, 2013 17:54
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9.5/10 pro-char payn xD
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  Posted on February 2, 2013 17:56
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Rasengan_89 wrote:
9.5/10 pro-char payn xD
thanks xD
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  Posted on February 2, 2013 18:06
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:huh :laugh :laugh :laugh
An interesting story...
10/10
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  Posted on February 2, 2013 18:12
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  Posted on February 2, 2013 18:19
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#6
Many grammar errors, Passive is op and very complicated character. He dosnt have an invulnerability skill D:<

its like a 25 damage + damage reduced by 5 for 2 turns on him and a 5 aoe heal to all other characters.

8/10
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  Posted on February 2, 2013 18:37
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Many grammer errors
How does cloning an enemy help yourself?
Deadly Genjutsu is OP and only cost 1 genjutsu
No invulnerability
In 6th skill it says if used by Tsukoyomi. That is Tsukoyomi. WHAT DOES THAT MEAN!?
This should be Tsukoyomi Itachi. Characthers that are places make no sense.
3/10

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  Posted on February 2, 2013 18:39
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T-BoyXkid wrote:
Many grammer errors
How does cloning an enemy help yourself?
Deadly Genjutsu is OP and only cost 1 genjutsu
No invulnerability
In 6th skill it says if used by Tsukoyomi. That is Tsukoyomi. WHAT DOES THAT MEAN!?
This should be Tsukoyomi Itachi. Characthers that are places make no sense.
3/10
gtfo hater
  Posted on February 2, 2013 20:27
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pain-ryningan wrote:
T-BoyXkid wrote:
Many grammer errors
How does cloning an enemy help yourself?
Deadly Genjutsu is OP and only cost 1 genjutsu
No invulnerability
In 6th skill it says if used by Tsukoyomi. That is Tsukoyomi. WHAT DOES THAT MEAN!?
This should be Tsukoyomi Itachi. Characthers that are places make no sense.
3/10
gtfo hater

Not my fault you cant make a good characther
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  Posted on February 2, 2013 20:32
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#10
Idk why they gave so high rates.
The char is Op, the tepmplate kills it even more and the grammar :sick
I can see you tried something "original", but in my point of view, it just did not work out.
I will not rate,not to hurt your feelings so much.

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  Posted on February 3, 2013 00:45
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pictures= 2/2 HQ pics
grammar/spelling mistakes= 0.5/2 God, I almost cannot understand it. Lots and lots of spelling mistakes
Originality and Balance= 2.5/5 Originality is quite good. But balance ruined it completely. Its super duper OP
presentation= 0.5/1 Font isn't very fitting and Font Sizes are wrong.

5.5/10
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  Posted on February 3, 2013 00:48
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7/10

Pretty creative but, as others stated it is OP
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  Posted on February 3, 2013 00:50
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gerronix11 wrote:
pictures= 2/2 HQ pics
grammar/spelling mistakes= 0.5/2 God, I almost cannot understand it. Lots and lots of spelling mistakes
Originality and Balance= 2.5/5 Originality is quite good. But balance ruined it completely. Its super duper OP
presentation= 0.5/1 Font isn't very fitting and Font Sizes are wrong.

5.5/10
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  Posted on February 3, 2013 00:52
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#14
the grammer :evil
the text, meh :blink
the skills and pics are great :amused
88/100
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  Posted on February 3, 2013 06:35
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T-BoyXkid wrote:
pain-ryningan wrote:
T-BoyXkid wrote:
Many grammer errors
How does cloning an enemy help yourself?
Deadly Genjutsu is OP and only cost 1 genjutsu
No invulnerability
In 6th skill it says if used by Tsukoyomi. That is Tsukoyomi. WHAT DOES THAT MEAN!?
This should be Tsukoyomi Itachi. Characthers that are places make no sense.
3/10
gtfo hater

Not my fault you cant make a good characther
go fuck jomama ;o