Cursed Mark Sasuke ~ By stalkersom


 Topic: Cursed Mark Sasuke ~ By stalkersom
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  Posted on January 31, 2013 14:12
stalkersom
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#1
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~Rate and CnC.
~If your rate is under 8 please explain or will be ignored
~If you find grammar mistakes please tell me and show if possible

Other Rules:

~Don't rip and spam
~All nb-na rules applied.
~Don't forget to answer the pool if it exists
~If you don't like it, please help me to improve him
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Edit: 1)Bone Crusher now has 2 cooldowns and is melee*
2)Strong Grab now has 2 cooldowns and is melee* + has new pic
3)Cursed Chidori now has 1 cooldown
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  Posted on January 31, 2013 14:18
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#2
I feel that is better 1 cooldown in CC o.o
and 2 cooldown in SG, and u forget that the skill is invisible
and 2 cooldown in BC

BC and SG is melee* (with the *)

With the balance and originality is great, i like the passive skill

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  Posted on January 31, 2013 14:19
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#3
Narutorazengan25 wrote:
I feel that is better 1 cooldown in CC o.o
and 2 cooldown in SG, and u forget that the skill is invisible
and 2 cooldown in BC

BC and SG is melee* (with the *)

With the balance and originality is great, i like the passive skill

9

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thanks, will correct now)
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  Posted on January 31, 2013 14:27
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#4
1st skill make it for 1 turn and reduce the cooldown for better balance
3rd skill would be better if it removes a certain chakra or 1 random chakra
The passive skill is great
i liked the creativity and the concept of this character
9/10
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  Posted on January 31, 2013 14:29
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#5
Try to get some better pics
7.5 overall
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  Posted on January 31, 2013 14:30
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8/10 e.e
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  Posted on January 31, 2013 14:37
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#7
thank you people!) will see what I can do with it, blueskull. As to pics, will try to look for better pics)
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  Posted on January 31, 2013 14:52
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  Posted on January 31, 2013 15:37
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#9
want more rates people! where are you???
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  Posted on January 31, 2013 15:43
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#10
9/10 nice pics :cool
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  Posted on January 31, 2013 17:51
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superstarX wrote:
9/10 nice pics :cool
thanks star)
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  Posted on January 31, 2013 22:41
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#12

9/10 Very good :amused
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  Posted on February 1, 2013 05:13
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#13
thanks
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  Posted on February 1, 2013 05:45
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8/10
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  Posted on February 1, 2013 07:31
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#15
this is **** Where is Sasuke's Invulnerable????????????