•Kisame• by Marcy


 Topic: •Kisame• by Marcy
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Poll: 1st group of characters?
15 vote(s) since January 30, 2013 20:54
7 Swordsmen (6) (40%)
Nagato & Paths (3) (20%)
Hokages (6) (40%)
  Posted on January 30, 2013 20:54
Marceline
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#1
Please rate and CnC.
Images I believe are from Gio's image shop.
Pics aren't made by me so it would be great if you seperated rates and CnCs.

Trial character for me getting back into the CC business. :3

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Special thanks to Lewis for putting my character on a template for me.
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Fennekin wrote:
Marceline wrote:
devilxain wrote:
How in hell did Marcy get the question right :O
Anyway Nemo when's the next hunt any specific time ?
This one is the only one which was placed in a good time. Matches my GMT B|
Betrayer is based. I know all the old guys like razor and slavik
Only 90's kids remember Betrayer.
  Posted on January 30, 2013 20:54
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  Posted on January 30, 2013 20:55
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#3
8/10


Nice char

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  Posted on January 30, 2013 20:56
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  Posted on January 30, 2013 20:57
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#5
You're welcome for me helping you put it on a template :amused . Nice description, nice skills, nice originality, nice uniqueness. I think the skill flow could be slightly better but a masterpiece especially for a first 10/10. I'll help you anytime you want to make a character.

Edit: Oh you used to make characters, I didn't know. Still 10/10 none the less.
  Posted on January 30, 2013 20:57
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#6
Wait, you're Kenny lover, aren't you? :cool JK

facepic's quality is bad :sad(send me a stock and I'll improve it for you)

5th skill deals damage to all enemies? That's OP. Make it 15

2nd skill's ally effect is UP-it shouldn't deal any damage to ally and should give some DR/DD for that cost

3rd skills seems ok :amused

good job :amused



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  Posted on January 30, 2013 20:59
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8 I Like it
little grammer error
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  Posted on January 30, 2013 21:00
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8/10 ;)
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  Posted on January 30, 2013 21:02
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@Czesio
I didn't make pics so that doesn't effect me at all. :3
Yeah I thought of making paper bombs 15 affliction.
I like to make my characters very anime oriented so, the fact that Kisame ruthlessly killed his allies I thought a little damage would be fitting. Maybe I'll reduce it to 10.
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Fennekin wrote:
Marceline wrote:
devilxain wrote:
How in hell did Marcy get the question right :O
Anyway Nemo when's the next hunt any specific time ?
This one is the only one which was placed in a good time. Matches my GMT B|
Betrayer is based. I know all the old guys like razor and slavik
Only 90's kids remember Betrayer.
  Posted on January 30, 2013 21:04
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#10
4/5
assaination should copy non-unique skills
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  Posted on January 30, 2013 21:07
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@Czesio
I didn't make pics so that doesn't effect me at all. :3
Yeah I thought of making paper bombs 15 affliction.
I like to make my characters very anime oriented so, the fact that Kisame ruthlessly killed his allies I thought a little damage would be fitting. Maybe I'll reduce it to 10.

maybe you don't, but people as me do :blink

I mean, 2nd skill will be UP even if you reduce damage to 10.
Think-would you use a skill which costs 2 chakra(1 specific and 1 random), deals damage to your ally and give him/her invulnerability against stuns/drains skills? Iw ouldn't use that :sad
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  Posted on January 30, 2013 21:08
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@Pein83, I liked the idea I did because in the anime he just took Samehada after he assasinated his master. :3

thanks everyone, but I'd also apreciate a CnC! Even if you think it's perfect cnc cnc Cnc!!!
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Fennekin wrote:
Marceline wrote:
devilxain wrote:
How in hell did Marcy get the question right :O
Anyway Nemo when's the next hunt any specific time ?
This one is the only one which was placed in a good time. Matches my GMT B|
Betrayer is based. I know all the old guys like razor and slavik
Only 90's kids remember Betrayer.
  Posted on January 30, 2013 21:14
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9/10. I like it alot.
  Posted on January 30, 2013 21:26
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Czesio_Poland wrote:
Marceline wrote:
@Czesio
I didn't make pics so that doesn't effect me at all. :3
Yeah I thought of making paper bombs 15 affliction.
I like to make my characters very anime oriented so, the fact that Kisame ruthlessly killed his allies I thought a little damage would be fitting. Maybe I'll reduce it to 10.

maybe you don't, but people as me do :blink

I mean, 2nd skill will be UP even if you reduce damage to 10.
Think-would you use a skill which costs 2 chakra(1 specific and 1 random), deals damage to your ally and give him/her invulnerability against stuns/drains skills? Iw ouldn't use that :sad
well yeah I might. It depends on the situation.
I like it and it seems that the majority of my rates are high. I won't change it right now but might consider it later. Thanks for your advice and whatnot.
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Fennekin wrote:
Marceline wrote:
devilxain wrote:
How in hell did Marcy get the question right :O
Anyway Nemo when's the next hunt any specific time ?
This one is the only one which was placed in a good time. Matches my GMT B|
Betrayer is based. I know all the old guys like razor and slavik
Only 90's kids remember Betrayer.
  Posted on January 30, 2013 22:21
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Czesio_Poland wrote:
Wait, you're Kenny lover, aren't you? :cool JK

HEY! >:C

Sorry, Marceline..

Oh well, ignoring the dark pics...

SS is better says "he ignores drain and stun skills"
and i really love the idea of Tool idea!

KTW is ranged o.o

With the balance is okay, i like, dont has a specific flow, but is okay

and with the lasts skill, maybe is a little OP o.o

but with 15 affliction (Like Czesio says) is UP, so is okay with that cost

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