Chouji by Vini1904


 Topic: Chouji by Vini1904
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Poll: Do you like this character?
5 vote(s) since January 28, 2013 14:03
Yes (4) (80%)
No (1) (20%)
  Posted on January 28, 2013 14:03
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#1
Now, my 3th chars, I hope you like it,

  Posted on January 28, 2013 14:08
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#2
For a third he is good, compared to other characters. Just meat Tank could have more originality and not be the same as ingame. Also you should state that the pills can only be used 3 times. Also on the last turn instead of making improved meat tank change to ultimate punch, you can make the pills change instead.

8/10
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  Posted on January 28, 2013 14:20
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#3
8/10 Nice joob.

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  Posted on January 28, 2013 14:21
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#4
9/10 good job .....

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  Posted on January 28, 2013 14:26
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#5
Good for a 3rd
8/10

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  Posted on January 28, 2013 14:29
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#6
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Rating:

- Sorry, but I really didn't like it, Is just a regular character with a bunch of alternate skills with no originality or creativity.

- To short this... It's just decent, not really special.But since is only your 3th character I won't go so hard on the rate.

Rating: 6/10
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  Posted on January 28, 2013 14:34
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#7
Pics- I like them. They look a bit dark IMO, but not bad at all.
Balance-This character has some balance problems. The main problems are the second and third pill. Super Extended Body could do higher damage, since not only it replaced a powerful skill (Extended Arm, which dealt 30 of damage), but Chouji also recieves afliction damage. I like the fact it ignores invulnreability, but I would make it deal 20-25 of piercing damage. Same goes for Ultimate Punch. It is a powerful skill, but after recieving 20 of afliction damage and loosing a very useful skill (Improoved Meat Tank) I believe it could have costed less chakra. (1 tai 1 rand). Other than that, the chakra seems to be well placed, cooldown too.
Flow&Creativity: The flow of this character is similar to the in-game's, but I think that is the better way. You added skills and made it longer and more original. It would be better if the new skills you get (Super Expansion Jutsu and Ultiate Punch) were better, since the player would find more use in using the pills.

7/10
Great job!
  Posted on January 28, 2013 14:37
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#8
8/10:rolleyes
  Posted on January 28, 2013 14:39
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  Posted on January 28, 2013 14:55
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#10
8/10 nice!

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  Posted on January 28, 2013 15:01
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#11
8 I Love it , Balanced too
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  Posted on January 28, 2013 15:05
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#12
7/10 Good char, pretty balanced unlike the actual...
  Posted on January 28, 2013 15:12
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#13
8/10 Nice joob
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  Posted on January 29, 2013 14:11
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#14
thank you everybody, Im always trying to improve
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