Orochimaru (S) ~ by BDG


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  Posted on January 18, 2013 22:45
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#1
Ehhhhhhhh didn't spend too much time on him. But here ya go.



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  Posted on January 18, 2013 22:47
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MQ pics
bad facepic's stock
3rd skill is OP
2nd skill is UP
pretty basic flow

8/10
  Posted on January 18, 2013 22:48
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10/10 just cause we have the same Avy, and sig characters <3 kirito

actual rating 9/10


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  Posted on January 18, 2013 22:56
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10 Becouse It A Mod If Not Then
8 Or 9
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  Posted on January 19, 2013 02:13
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8.4/10.
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  Posted on January 19, 2013 02:29
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8/10
  Posted on January 20, 2013 00:45
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Thanks for the rates

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10 Becouse It A Mod If Not Then
8 Or 9

I do want it to be known I don't want any special treatment as a mod, though, I'm just like any other character creator, no bias necessary.
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  Posted on January 20, 2013 01:44
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i'd really suggest that you improve the facepic...

perhaps you can make Sword Snake Regurgitation Action type to boost it... it already has a hefty cooldown and has a specific cost that clashes with his other two skills. i highly doubt people would want to use a skill that may end up dealing just 10 damage and unusable for 5 turns. maybe you can also replace the bloodline cost to ninjutsu?

Summoning: Triple Rashoumon's is just so insane with its defense, it appears somewhat OP to me despite its drawbacks.

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  Posted on January 20, 2013 09:14
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I find him pretty simple >.> and I was like "oh he did a naruto character D:"

From my vision, 3rd skill is like the beginning of a concept, like it starts with 50 d.d. and his others skill could improve that, or the opposite effect idk.

@About the skills: Change the 2nd to action & decrease the d.d. to 75 with cd of 5 maybe.
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  Posted on January 20, 2013 14:59
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#10
Oro... e.e

Rating

- Too plain, and kinda boring, yeah I liked the flow, but still boring.

- He doesn't really have a settled concept, like Firebane said.

- I don't see any problem with the balance, actually is great, but lacks creativity.

Overall: 7,6
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  Posted on January 21, 2013 23:23
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Pretty basic but Good.
The face pic is Weird.
8/10.
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  Posted on January 26, 2013 02:47
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Pattern wrote:
Pretty basic but Good.
The face pic is Weird.
8/10.