Neji (S) || By Rasengan_89

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Posted on January 18, 2013 15:02

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Credits for the original picture I used for the banner go to Ricardonamikaze
Credits for the final banner I used go to me

Hello there.
Comments like "Bad skills" "6.1/10" "wtf lol" will be ignored.
RATE AND COMMENT PLEASE, EXPLAIN RATE UNDER 8.5

Chakra Usage: 1

- 2

- 0

- 3

Here you are some notes before you comment:
- About the facepic
I can't improve it more than this. If anyone can do it better, please send me the face pic and I will change it immediately
- About the pics
I did my best, I am a newbie in making very small pictures, esp in HQ
- About the skills
Just define OP and UP and how should I change it.
- About the grammar
If you find any mistake, report it so I can fix that. I am Italian, you woul help me in improving my English
- About the CnC
I want to read them. Without them I cant improve the character and myself

Credits go to:
- Rasengan_89 (me) for editing the pictures and making the characters.
- Sorina_Hokage for the screenshots.

Average rate: x/10 Based upon the x rates
Thanks to everyone who comments :)

Please, rate and comment, and criticise eventually all my characters!

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Posted on January 18, 2013 15:08

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Posted on January 18, 2013 15:11

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7/10 i dont like the pics
almost are bad

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Posted on January 18, 2013 15:13

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9/10

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Posted on January 18, 2013 15:19

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superstarX wrote:

7/10 i dont like the pics
almost are bad

Always commenting on pics.
You are supposed to read the character. You can say "I dont like pics" but at least read the character. Ignored.

Posted on January 18, 2013 15:22

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Rasengan_89 wrote:

superstarX wrote:

7/10 i dont like the pics
almost are bad

Always commenting on pics.
You are supposed to read the character. You can say "I dont like pics" but at least read the character. Ignored.

i like your character thats why i give you 7
i just only dislike the pics

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Posted on January 18, 2013 15:35

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7/10 e.e

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Posted on January 18, 2013 15:39

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I need CnC not random rates, I am sorry but all are ignored :D

Posted on January 18, 2013 15:41

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i like the idea and creativity
the 3rd skill is a bit OP the part were one random ally's skill cost is reduced by 1 nin
anyways great character 9/10

Posted on January 18, 2013 15:45

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#10

Thanks skull :) :amused

Posted on January 18, 2013 15:59

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#11

Really good character
I think it's balanced and very original
I really like Idea with Sixty-Four Palms )))
10... :amused

Posted on January 18, 2013 16:17

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#12

7.2/10 no have great ideas, lq pics, facepic is SOOOOOOO bad cropped, the flow is meh very simple. :/

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Posted on January 18, 2013 19:37

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#13

10/10
pro is pro

Posted on January 18, 2013 19:54

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#14

Thanks all.
FP changed.

Posted on January 18, 2013 20:01

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#15

RARFEL wrote:

7.2/10 no have great ideas, lq pics, facepic is SOOOOOOO bad cropped, the flow is meh very simple. :/

And you only rate the pics because you are SOOOOOOOOOOOOO lazy.
OT: 1st skill looks ok. 2nd skill has a typo "Thisskill" and I like the idea. 3rd skill should have a CD of 4, I see some grammar mistakes. Pics are ok, looks MQ.
OVR: 8/10.

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