Kyuubi Chakra Mode Naruto (S) ~ by stalkersom

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Posted on January 17, 2013 22:13

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~If your rate is under 8 please explain or will be ignored
~If you find grammar mistakes please tell me and show if possible

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Edit: The char's skills were added with the new one + the old one were changed a bit. Mission was improved as well as its picture.

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Posted on January 17, 2013 22:21

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fails:
4rd skill kyuubi chakra mode activation? dafuq?
1st skill concentration have one "*" but in the classes don't have

character:
good pics
loved the fp
3rd skill is SO OP costing 1 blood and 1 random from 30 AFFLICTION! Is better 2 nin or 2 blood

Overall good, but little OP :\

8/10

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Posted on January 17, 2013 22:23

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RARFEL wrote:

ok, thanks, will correct him)) and thanks for the places of fails, haven't noticed)

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Posted on January 17, 2013 22:25

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I was planning to make a new Chakra mode too Som, you always make it earlier than me!

For the rest is balanced, but the additionals skills are nth so special :\

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Posted on January 17, 2013 22:30

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Rasengan_89 wrote:

I was planning to make a new Chakra mode too Som, you always make it earlier than me!

For the rest is balanced, but the additionals skills are nth so special :\

Yea, it's tru Rasen) Thanks for your invisible rate :laugh

, however, speaking about additional skills, I also not completely accept them and still try to find better idea for them, to make more original and interesting and not copy Naruto's simple repeating skills (that with stuns for example) :smile

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Posted on January 17, 2013 22:41

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Just put 25 piercing damage on Mini rasen...
Put 1 cooldown on the Rasen Absor...

The Rest is Okay ;]

9/10 for now ^^

Mission:
Put 8 battles with Sennin Naruto and 5 Battes with Naruto (S)
Put 5 in a row with 4 Tails kyuubi Naruto and 5 in a row with Naruto (S)
Put 7 normal battles with killer bee (S) and 5 normal battles with kyuubi naruto (S)
ONLY~
Because this char is so PRO ;]
The Mission Pic is... bleh :|
7/10 for now ^^

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Posted on January 17, 2013 22:45

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RARFEL wrote: