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Posted on January 12, 2013 13:51

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Posted on January 12, 2013 13:53

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Posted on January 12, 2013 13:53

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its alright 7/10 and the face pic is ewwwwww and the 1st 4th and 6th skills are ewwwwww to improve on pics but everything thing else is good

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Posted on January 12, 2013 13:54

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I cant tell whats happening in every pic cept rasengan

facepic?!

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Posted on January 12, 2013 13:56

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2/10 for the laughs It shows no originality.

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Posted on January 12, 2013 13:56

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4/10.

Posted on January 12, 2013 14:01

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This si the other FP i made.

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Posted on January 12, 2013 14:01

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3/10

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Posted on January 12, 2013 14:08

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Posted on January 12, 2013 14:11

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#10

5/10. there's a good foundation here, but there are a lot of improvements to be made.

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Posted on January 12, 2013 14:25

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4/10 face pics are bad :amused

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Posted on January 12, 2013 14:34

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#12

Pics are bad
And description too
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Posted on January 12, 2013 14:37

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#13

hahahahhaha I see I have created a new fashion on such Naruto looooool)))

@on the topic:
it really needs improvements. Give more description, better rename skills' titles (except Bijudama Rasengan).
2nd skill - add cooldowns or write in teh secription that it can used be again when triggered
6th skill - make it piercing damage for better balance.

On the whole it is not so interesting - no originality (only Regenration is good for me). Improve your pics and is some places grammar (1st skill - Naruto takes 10 affliction damage, 6th skill - increases the damage dealt to enemies by 5)

5/10