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  Posted on January 12, 2013 13:51
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  Posted on January 12, 2013 13:53
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nice mate 10,..........................................
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  Posted on January 12, 2013 13:53
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its alright 7/10 and the face pic is ewwwwww and the 1st 4th and 6th skills are ewwwwww to improve on pics but everything thing else is good
  Posted on January 12, 2013 13:54
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I cant tell whats happening in every pic cept rasengan

facepic?!

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  Posted on January 12, 2013 13:56
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2/10 for the laughs It shows no originality.
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  Posted on January 12, 2013 13:56
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4/10.
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  Posted on January 12, 2013 14:01
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  Posted on January 12, 2013 14:01
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3/10
  Posted on January 12, 2013 14:08
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  Posted on January 12, 2013 14:11
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5/10. there's a good foundation here, but there are a lot of improvements to be made.
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  Posted on January 12, 2013 14:25
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4/10 face pics are bad :amused
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  Posted on January 12, 2013 14:34
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Pics are bad
And description too
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  Posted on January 12, 2013 14:37
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hahahahhaha I see I have created a new fashion on such Naruto looooool)))

@on the topic:
it really needs improvements. Give more description, better rename skills' titles (except Bijudama Rasengan).
2nd skill - add cooldowns or write in teh secription that it can used be again when triggered
6th skill - make it piercing damage for better balance.

On the whole it is not so interesting - no originality (only Regenration is good for me). Improve your pics and is some places grammar (1st skill - Naruto takes 10 affliction damage, 6th skill - increases the damage dealt to enemies by 5)

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  Posted on January 12, 2013 14:38
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5/10.
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  Posted on January 12, 2013 14:39
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are u using translator any way 5.5/10
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