Akatsuki Sasuke (S)


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  Posted on January 8, 2013 21:49
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Hello,this is my new character.Please note that is my 6th character.If you don't understand something,or i have grammar mistakes,or anything,tell me
Rates under 8 win't be count for me if they are with no cnc.Please,help me improve!
Ignore the pictures quality,you are rating my character,not the pics :)
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  Posted on January 8, 2013 21:52
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Mangekyou should cost a gen and random. Overall he's pretty good. If I didn't know any better I'd say someone is shitting a blue string if I looked at chidori blade.
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  Posted on January 8, 2013 21:52
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double border on 3rd skill pic

little overpowered on 1st skill

dodge not is a dodge! should be sword parry

simple

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  Posted on January 8, 2013 21:53
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Totally OP.
1st skill should have at least 1/2 turns CD.
2nd skill is similar to the in-game one.
3rd skill is OP, No CD for a 35 affliction skill plus 5 permanent affl dmg per turn.
At least give a 2 turns CD.
Some mistakes in grammar spelling ò_ò
Good classes.

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  Posted on January 8, 2013 21:54
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Yep,i saw the invu problem,that's not a dodge.Fail .
  Posted on January 8, 2013 21:56
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  Posted on January 8, 2013 21:58
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  Posted on January 8, 2013 21:58
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Not flow, not original, OP

the pics are ur..?

CB deals 2 differents damage.. and the skill says that deals 5 more damage..

So.. 10 more every time is used?

MG is ranged, and.. mental damage?

is 5to character, so need better work

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  Posted on January 8, 2013 21:58
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I think he's looking a little overpowered, and he could be way more interesting :s
  Posted on January 8, 2013 22:00
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  Posted on January 8, 2013 22:01
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Narutorazengan25 wrote:
Not flow, not original, OP

the pics are ur..?

CB deals 2 differents damage.. and the skill says that deals 5 more damage..

So.. 10 more every time is used?

MG is ranged, and.. mental damage?

is 5to character, so need better work

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I'm not trying to make characters with a gigantic skill description.Simple and clear.
And he's not doing 10 more damage with CB,it deals 25 damage first turn(normal 15+10 aff) then,whenever is used,it will deal 5 more damage (20+10 aff)
Mental damage is not that a big mistake,i meant like no aff or piercing
  Posted on January 8, 2013 22:05
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I don't like the pics.
Some grammar mistakes.
No originality and there is NO flow,Nothing special.
The classes are good,I'll give you that.
In the 2nd skill:"20 mental damage".Um..Ok.But I've seen only in S-A these things.Like:"X deal 25 physical damage".
For me,it's boring as heck(and simple).Btw,the first skill's idea is kinda taken from Kin.
Because it's your 6th char i'll raise my rate with 2 points.FINAL RATE:5.5/10.
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  Posted on January 8, 2013 22:13
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  Posted on January 8, 2013 22:32
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Not bad 6,5/10 :cool
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  Posted on January 8, 2013 22:34
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Overpowered :amazed
he should do less damage and stun less
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