Edo Tensei Kimimaro (S) by Iulian


 Topic: Edo Tensei Kimimaro (S) by Iulian
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  Posted on December 28, 2012 11:21
iulianbuhai
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#1
Long time ago i didn't made any character.
I suck at english so tell me the mistakes i made.
Image credits: Facepic: otomuss
Skills: Lengkilod
Sum info from wikipedia.
Tell me what to edit to make it more OP or less Up.
Hope ya like the originality.
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  Posted on December 28, 2012 11:25
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Nice character 8 out of 10

Mikasa is everything.
  Posted on December 28, 2012 11:39
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"he gonna take"?
Dr. wrote:
Be who you are and say what you feel, because those that mind don't matter... and those who matter don't mind.
  Posted on December 28, 2012 11:47
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"he gonna" .. lol .. nyc character .. a few english mistakes but other than dude it good .. 8 out of 10
  Posted on December 28, 2012 11:58
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VanillaGFX wrote:
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"he gonna take"?

I can put "he takes" ?
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  Posted on December 28, 2012 12:01
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#6
lq template and pics.
people will crap on the font from ccc. it is good, but some ppl hate it.
bedddd gremmhurr
upload with imgur next time, it is hq.
little op.

6/10.
  Posted on December 28, 2012 13:14
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7.5/10

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  Posted on December 28, 2012 13:53
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#8
It would've been better if you would've made the pictures yourself because these aren't good anyway. Especially the FP. I think you should've specified something about his abilities in the description too. Also change the mission name, because it's a really bad one. The fifth member can mean anything, not just Sound's Four member. Second skill should have a cooldown of 2 instead. Third skill also doesn't need cooldown. I don't really see any originality in this nor flow. A slight try of a concept with 1st and 3rd skill, but after that, nothing. Also your grammar isn't that good.

Unsatisfying. 3/10
  Posted on December 28, 2012 16:07
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8.5/10

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  Posted on October 16, 2013 19:22
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  Posted on October 16, 2013 19:24
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7/10.
  Posted on October 19, 2013 07:55
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#12
10/10 good job on the char
  Posted on October 25, 2013 14:03
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#13
he is very underpowred
10 dmg with 1 tai
10 dmg to all with 1 tai 1 ran
his counter doesnt deal any damage + he counters only melee skills
5/10
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  Posted on December 9, 2013 22:03
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I think first skill need a good balance and make him piercing
8/10
Good pics , nice char
  Posted on December 10, 2013 23:49
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