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Posted on December 22, 2012 03:17

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Hello , This is my first character created

So I do not think it such a good job. :S

Rate.

Posted on December 22, 2012 03:19

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8/10

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Posted on December 22, 2012 03:28

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6/10

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Posted on December 22, 2012 03:28

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8.5 good start but you made some writing wrong

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Posted on December 22, 2012 03:29

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muy good jajaja 9/10 :3 :amused

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Posted on December 22, 2012 03:30

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8/10 good for a first.

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Posted on December 22, 2012 03:31

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6/10, good for your first character

Posted on December 22, 2012 03:32

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For the first charater is pretty good.

Rating:

- Well, nothing really important to say, just try to spice him up.

- The facepic is looking in the wrong way

Overall: 8/10

Posted on December 22, 2012 03:35

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#9

5/10 Grammar mistakes, skills are blah, and pics.

Posted on December 22, 2012 03:38

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I don't like pics.FP is wrong side.(-1)
Grammar errors.(-1)
Even if it's your first character seems to simple try to be creative next time.(-1)
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Posted on December 22, 2012 03:45

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Srry for the grammar errors , i espeak some english.

Posted on December 22, 2012 03:47

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elprincipe195 wrote:

Srry for the grammar errors , i espeak some english.

It's ok but u seee ur sig its not suppose to have body parts just chin to head.

Posted on December 22, 2012 03:55

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#13

One question how is better the pic 75x75 or 77x77

Posted on December 22, 2012 04:04

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elprincipe195 wrote:

One question how is better the pic 75x75 or 77x77

75x75 without border and 77x77 is with border for you is recomended to make 75x75 '-'

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Posted on December 22, 2012 10:09

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7/10
Try not to make writing errors and double check before posting.

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