Kushimaru Kuriarare (S)


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  Posted on December 22, 2012 03:17
elprincipe195
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Hello , This is my first character created

So I do not think it such a good job. :S

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  Posted on December 22, 2012 03:19
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8/10
  Posted on December 22, 2012 03:28
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6/10
  Posted on December 22, 2012 03:28
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8.5 good start but you made some writing wrong
  Posted on December 22, 2012 03:29
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muy good jajaja 9/10 :3
  Posted on December 22, 2012 03:30
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8/10 good for a first.

Pretty much retired from NB, find me on MyAnimeList from now on
  Posted on December 22, 2012 03:31
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6/10, good for your first character
  Posted on December 22, 2012 03:32
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For the first charater is pretty good.

Rating:

- Well, nothing really important to say, just try to spice him up.

- The facepic is looking in the wrong way

Overall: 8/10
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  Posted on December 22, 2012 03:35
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5/10 Grammar mistakes, skills are blah, and pics.

  Posted on December 22, 2012 03:38
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I don't like pics.FP is wrong side.(-1)
Grammar errors.(-1)
Even if it's your first character seems to simple try to be creative next time.(-1)
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  Posted on December 22, 2012 03:45
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Srry for the grammar errors , i espeak some english.
  Posted on December 22, 2012 03:47
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elprincipe195 wrote:
Srry for the grammar errors , i espeak some english.
It's ok but u seee ur sig its not suppose to have body parts just chin to head.
  Posted on December 22, 2012 03:55
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One question how is better the pic 75x75 or 77x77
  Posted on December 22, 2012 04:04
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elprincipe195 wrote:
One question how is better the pic 75x75 or 77x77
75x75 without border and 77x77 is with border for you is recomended to make 75x75 '-'
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  Posted on December 22, 2012 10:09
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7/10
Try not to make writing errors and double check before posting.
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