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Posted on December 11, 2012 15:29

JoeyMcGrath
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oh, hey, waddup?
Still trying to figure out this computer so the images are probably looking bad on yours, but they look great on mine....lol....which is how I know they're bad..

Anyhow, rate!

(Example for skill 2: Chiyo's random puppet attack will also target another random
enemy for 10 damage each turn instead of 20)

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Posted on December 11, 2012 15:34

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I hate the pics. Unlike the rest of your characters i dont think you did well with this one

Second skill is unneeded, it needs to be replaced with something.

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Posted on December 11, 2012 15:38

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valyo wrote:

I hate the pics. Unlike the rest of your characters i dont think you did well with this one

Second skill is unneeded, it needs to be replaced with something.

The shading for the episode where I got most of his pics was funky, so I expected to hear "bad pics" haha

The deal with the second skill is that it would give his first skill a chance to deal damage to another enemy, so it improves it in a way.

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Posted on December 11, 2012 15:38

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Nice one..

Rating:

- His Fissure cloud is kinda UP, change the improved skill type, to something like Melee or even Physical skills, cuz I can't understand why this skill would improve only Unique skills.

- I like the idea of no-randon is his skills, it makes him a direct attacker.

- All the rest is fine to me

- And don't worry, pics aren't a big deal anyway

Overall: 8.5/10

Posted on December 11, 2012 15:46

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ok
so:
4th skill isn't unique

1st skill should deal at least 30 dmg
2nd skill is nice, but:
all enemies*
all allies' unique skills target 1.....*
3rd skill isUP and has pretty useless effects(has too big cooldown+needs another skill to be used) so it's super UP

1st skill is Melee and not unique

Won't rate because it would be pretty low rate :oh